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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18.... You did a FABULOUS job writing the conversation between Hermione & Minerva as well as the one between Severus & Minerva!!! I really like how parts of the seperate conversations mirrored each other*
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Aoibheann - Brilliant! It\'s an \'easy\' (i hope it\'s as easy for you to wri sto story you\'re writing. Not a lot of angst and \'outside\' adversity. It makes for a nice change. And it illuminates your exceptional characterizations of SS and HG. I\'m not sure I can look at SS in the same way again. And to make HG, \'the Scholar\', BE the scholar - lover of knowledge - and wanting to grow up and use her knowledge for the sake of others, is so Right. I\'ve really enjoyed the story and look forward to the next chapters.
Affectionately, -E-
Affectionately, -E-
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It truly amazes me how you can keep Severus in character. Poor Harry, I could feel the realization waving over him, I\'m still quite sad for him. I think, you showed how hard it is for the one left behind to move on, very well. Thanks for writing.
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 was very well done. I can see how it would take so long to write. It\'s always the emotions that have to be carefully written if you want them to really effect your reader. You did a wonderful job. I really like the line where you described all of Severus\' emotions pouring out of him with a kiss. With your permission, I wouldn\'t mind using a similar description.
Good work!!!
~Lara
Good work!!!
~Lara
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely WONDERFUL chew out! Harry deserved every harsh word of it!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a totally excellent chapter. I loved the interaction between Snape and Harry. I can almost feel sorry for Harry. Thank you for the reading pleasure this morning!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 was GREAT!!! With age comes wisdom & Severus showed just how wise he was, without having to resort to curses & vice. ce. Instead he chose to use his mind & words filled with painful truth, FABULOUS!!! Will you be telling more about Harry in future chapters? I do think it would be nice to know if he does in fact move on or if he falls on his face. Til next update, Deb >^..^<
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The story is moving along very nicely!!! What Sev said about Harry made a lot of sense!!! I really did like the way that Hermione defended Sev\'s honour, so much heart went into what she said*
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still reading and enjoying...just lacking anything partirly rly clever to say. :)
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i;m enjoying every bit of this story....keep up the good work