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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I bet this next chapter is going to be hard to write. Good story, great writing. Thanks.
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Adultery is such an unpleasant subject, but holly crap do you make this believable. Thanks for writing.
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another FABULOUS chapter!!! I LOVE this part:
Hermione leaned into him and whispered,
Hermione leaned into him and whispered,
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i am SO stealing the \"i want your mouth on every part of me that is either hard, wet or quivering\" line for the next time the kids are asleep and i\'m alone with hubby ~ wow.
love the combination of humor and emotion. nice job!
love the combination of humor and emotion. nice job!
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure if I\'ve reviewed this before, but it\'s so sweet and wonderful. I\'m really enjoying it.
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
poor y --y -- o.k., enough of that and on with ss/hg!
well, that might be a bit insensitive of me, but i agree with hermione\'s assessment that it\'s a bit late in the game to realize that they don\'t know each other and i so love the way you\'re writing the relationship between hermione and severus. carry on! looking forward to more chapters.
well, that might be a bit insensitive of me, but i agree with hermione\'s assessment that it\'s a bit late in the game to realize that they don\'t know each other and i so love the way you\'re writing the relationship between hermione and severus. carry on! looking forward to more chapters.
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chap Se Severus and Hermione are a great match in this fic. She just needs to come clean with Harry and move on.
More bedroom scenes too, if you please. Thanks.
More bedroom scenes too, if you please. Thanks.
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is an excellent fic please continue soon i really love it
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I normally don\'t like the \"wife cheats on Harry\" fics, but I sure hope Hermione chooses Severus. Your portrayal of Harry shows that he doesn\'t understand her at all. \"Little experiments\" my ass!
I look forward to more chaps.
I look forward to more chaps.
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I admit that I was hoping that it would be Severus that walked up to Hermione, buthinthink you did very well to make it Harry!!! He did an awful lot of assuming & then didn\'t even bother to kiss her before he left so quickly. The end of chapter 5 brought tears to my eyes, hearing Severus telling of his past while opening up to Hermione & the future, I LOVED that part!!! This is turning into a better story with each chapter I readm lom looking forward to more!!! Deb >^..^<