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for If You\'re Gone

by sherdelune

person Aspy
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

of tof the most beautiful fic that I\'ve ever read lately.

Please continue your story is very original and fantastic, I love the couple HP/SS.

CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Simon Erif
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More... please??!!! Fantastic story so far. Absolutely faantastic! please do continue soon... *puppy eyes*
person MieRiddle
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
beautiful. but you realise that it could never happen,right? if he went back in the past and his parents death was changed, then he would never have taken a portkey to dudley\'s funeral in the first place. so none of it would have ever happened. wri write more to this anway.
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There will be more to this story. Taran and I will be working on it after we complete other things we are working on. Hang in there, this will be continued!
person SailorPoison
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! What I read so far, I like. Neat twist that James and Lily Potter were saved anill ill alive in Harry\'s time. But what got me was the whom you paired harry with. Before now I would have sword the pairing was not even appealing. You proved me wrong. I like how you did it. Keep up the yummy good work!
person satikat
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re going to post more soon right?

Does Snape have Harry\'s cloak and map?

Evil cliffhanger. But I\'m hoping since it ended in midsentence you have another chunk of the story all ready to be posted. Right? Please?
person Gem/Hermione
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Stella. I hope there\'s another part. I\'d reall like to see the present day Snape and Harry get together and James and Lily to be alive. Lookin forward to more.
person moonstonemystyk
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! You can\'t leave it there!!! I want to read more, please continue.
person moonstonemystyk
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! You can\'t leave it there!!! I want to read more, please continue.