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for Dreamscapes: A Broken Heart

by JainaDurron

person Joycie
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You have to continue this... and soon! Keep up the great work Jilly! I love Pansy/Harry and Draco/Hermione fics! :)
person LUMEN
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOH, the plot is definetely thickening!!! so old voldy is using poor pansy, i just hope that pansy does not hurt harry really and of course she wont get hurt either. i never thought that i would look foward to the pairing of harry and pansy...go figure LOL!
interesting that draco can see the danger that is about to take place.
it was a short realreally good chapter, keep up with the excellent work;)

hugs,

LUMEN
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Scum Voldy has gotten to Pansy, is she at all aware of what she is doing to Harry? What did the red castle mean? Will Draco be able to help him? Hoping for answers to these questions in your next updates!!! Til Chapter 4, Deb >^..^<
person LUMEN
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like how the story is going!!! love the sweetness between draco and hermione, they are definetely a perfect couple!!!!
also, i like the pairing of pansy and harry being a couple;)
keep up with the excellent work, can hardly wait to find out what harry is going to do about pansy!!!

hugs,

LUMEN
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m curious to see how Harry decides to deal with this love from Pansy? Will he allow himself to open up to her? Will be watching for chapter 3. Deb >^..^<
person LUMEN
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING STORY!!!

today i read the first part of dreamscapes I and i was totally hooked to it!!! i love the way you write and the whole plot oe ste story;)
what fascinated me the most about your story was the sweetness of the love between draco and hermione, just love it;)

i read chapter one of dreamscapes II and i\'m hooked again LOL!!!! i like the little twist of pansy having a crush with harry, can hardly wait to see what happends there!!

please keep up with your excellent work and hope to see a new chapter really soon:)

hugs,

LUMEN
p.s. i noticed that you also wrote a marcus and katie fic...YAY!!!! apart that i am total devoted shipper of leather & libaries, i\'m also an 100% marcus and katie shipper.*big grin*
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looks like I\'ll be following another interesting story in this sequel!!! I just never pictured Pansy wanting Harry, sould prove to be quite interesting indeed!!! Deb >^..^<
person Joga
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I\'ve been a faithful reader of the original story though I have not commented. Now ith the sequel, let me tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. The sequel promises to be equally interesting. An interesting potential pairing you have there. And I like how you\'ve made me liking pansy with just a few lines. Well done! Looking forward to more.