rate_review Reviews

oh, my darling....

you know that i find everything you do to be
of such superb quality. it is wonderous story telling
and i find myself doubting my abilities as a writer.

i can't do it this well!

you know i loved it very much. i look forward to
the next part.

keep in touch and don't forget about me. *sniff, sniff*

*huggles and cuddles*

~belssings~
ldf

need i say anything? actually, yes, there is
one thing i have to say.

i love the way your Snape is everything i think
he should be. the exterior snarkiness with the
inner self-loathing and the possessive way he
regards Harry.

and Lucius.... tears, darling. tears.

BRAVA! keep up the good work

*hugs and snugs*

~blessings~
ldf

oh, this chapter is so poignant! tears, my dear.
actual salty, wet tears. i possotively loved it!

i think you have outdone yourself with this one.
i can feel..... everything.

i anxiously await more, my dear.

you are truly a master of the written word,
and i humble myself before your ability!

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf

You\'re my new God, mmk? *toogringrin*

Honestly, this is by far the best thing I\'ve ever read on the net, and I\'ve read a lot. This is the fiirst time I reply, and I found this fiction quite recently. You are... Brilliant. No, you\'re more then brilliant, you are.. The best, y\'know. I love how Severus and Harry are so canon, it doesnfeelfeel unrealistic (well, except for the point that they\'re wizards and all that. But all of us have some piece of magic within, don\'t you think? :) ) at all. I had never read S/H before this one, I\'ve always been doubtful towards it.. Because I thought it was uncannon. But, I had to swallow those thoughts (Quite happily ;) ) and now I\'m a slave under this fiction. LOL, it happends I can\'t recall where certain things are from, if I\'ve read them here or in the books, in the books or here. I keep mixing things up! I talked to my sister about a scene, the one when Harry\'s alone with Severus at Sirius\' house, and I was angry at her because she couldn\'t remember it.

I\'m babbling, and I\'m sorry for that, but.. Never, ever stop writing. Especially not this one. I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter! :)

what can i say, darling?
other than i am completely enthralled.
again.

now to wait on the rest of it!

but i\'m not hinting or anything.
~sits and twiddles thumbs and toes~

nope. i\'m not hinting at all.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf

do i dare disturb the universe? in a minute there will be time for all the decisions and revisions thata minute will reverse.

Kai, my dear....

you already know how i feel. it still amazes me
that you are so capable of giving such great visuals
and maintain the suspense of the impending clash
between Harry and Severus.

i am in awe of your ability with this arc. i am absolutely
enraptured by this. i am quite aware that you have a
certain ability with words and descriptions and everything else
that holds me in thrall.

it is certain that you have such exquisite talent as to make me
completely jealous. the way you hold the plot together, the way
the story flows so easily. i am so green with envy, i cannot begin
to tell you how much so. the depth of characters, the total picture,
is enough to make me wish i were so much better at my own writing.

thank you for entrusting such a wonderful masterpiece to my hands.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf

Holy shit, dude. For someone with the nads to say, \"Don\'t flame me,\" in their profile, you have an astoundingly poor grasp of what merits a flame. Grammar--take a class in it. Please pay close attention to the concepts of spelling, comma use and sentence structure and also, oh my dear lord, learn how the fuck to write dialogue. QUOTATION MARKS are your fucking friend!!!!!!!!! Perhaps you\'re now offended and think to your self (note how I use quotes now), \"Hey! I can spell!\" Well, then dear writer, you certainly can\'t proofread. If you have a beta, fire them. If you don\'t, get one. Jesus Fucking Christ I hate people who think their ideas for a plot merit publication and the waste of bandwith depiste their nonexistant grasp of the english language. Please go learn to write or pull this off and save someone the server space. Dunderhead.

Somthin\'s funny on your updates.....

::scratches head::

need i really say anything? othern i n i am
anxiously awaiting finding out where this
all ends up at.


you know i just love this, and i am honored
that you would use me as a beta.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf