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by Sarryn

person debz
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is looking good give us some new chapters will ya
its not fair to leave it there really huffs
cmon give us another chapter hehe
i love this snape yes i do goodie
cmon yey give us another chapter dont make us wait any longer
its quite a good story !! lol yey
bye
person debz
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon

harry is given a potion that will stop his magic from being able to be used

ooo cant wait till next chapter gods keep us waiting not really fair when people want ya to update

it will only take a while i cant wait too see what our own potions master is gonna do yummie grins

no offence i love this sev really evil mmmmahhhww hhehe update will ya dont keep us waiting

yeye bye
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. So what happens next? No sequel? Keep up the great work. coolsa.
person sexypink20022
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like this a lot. please continue with the story.
person Ianthe
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update this fanfic? I lve him! Really want to know more! Pleaseeee!
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW. its so beutiful at the beggining, not achingly beutifull, but richly so. and then it get soo scary..., please dont end it there!!!!
person Fate
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You have to update!!
Please?!?!?
This chapter is absolutley amazing!!
Can\'t wait for more!
person Reishana
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE NOW!! please. I love the way you write Snape. Please write more it\'s a very good story!
person Hijja
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved this - everything from the intriguing mythological introduction to Harry having given up on magic to Snape\'s utterly in-character appearance and demands. And Harry\'s reaction to the betrayal of his \'friends\' at Hogwarts was utterly vivid and painful. You\'d make me a ridiculously happy creature if that story were to be continued (*makes puppy eyes*). And as always, I just adore your style. Thanks for posting this intriguing story!
person unsigned
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There is going to more to this soon right? Please! I love your description of Snape and am eagerly waiting for the next part.