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for The Second Bubble Bath

by Jeanette

person Megan Consoer
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person angelgrl198816
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE! I have to know what happens! This is great I was wondering about the whole "you" thing. The rubber ducky thing...that was unexpected! But in a good way!
Please and Thank YOU!,
Alexandra17
person loveofmusic
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi good job. I hope you write more. I know this is a late review but i just found sit site.
person Sare Liz
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gaah! ...That is, this was lovely, and I can\'t wait for the next chapter, yes please, thank you.
person Red Writing Hood
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uh...just WHERE can I get this...rubber duck doll?

LOL

Red
person Pearle
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I thought it was the cat at first! *LOL* Please continue this, I like your characterizations.
person shiv5468
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh well done!!!!

Mixing two challenges and bringing off so well. Very funny.

I do wonder if Severus managed to put his train in the engine shed.
person Rilla
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great twist! Fabulous.
person Fish
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol - oh, you genius, you!

ciao,
Fish
person CMW
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, I can\'t stop laughing! I\'m going to take this with me all day at work to make my co-workers wonder what the heck I\'m laughing at. Well done, Jeanette! BG.