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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME! YEAH! COOL! yeah..... I liked...liked...the story....yeah. Thanx for the review, I\'m workin on the next chapter, but I sort of have writters block, any ideas?
Alarka
Alarka
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEASE update this story!!! When you do could you please email me!!! Thanks, Deb >^..^<
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hello everyone, i have a bata reader now, im just waiting for her to post the next chapter for you all...i hope its soon...i hope you like it so f tha thanks for the reviews
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
shem, where are you??? I thought you wanted to help me??email me ok. Hope you all like.. Sorry for the miss spelling..not very good at that, never have been, never will..i hope you all enjoy...more to come, i promise. tah tah,
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
interesting... but PLEASE format.
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How did Lucius get Hermione? What is going to happen to her as far as Severus is concerned, will he show more caring toward her after this? Will be watching for chapter 3*
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The stort seems like a good one but perhaps you could tidy up things a bit. At points it is unclear who is talking to whom and paragrapg separation is always a good thing. I am not flaming....please don\'t think that. You have a very good story started here and I would like to see it get the hits and reviews it deserves but it needs also be a little easier to read. Ok? Thanks and I look forward to future updates.