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eylo...im not much of a harry potter fan, at all, but this was relle good!!! and thanx for reviewin my other ficc and recommending it!! but still great job keep writing!! much love -Abby ~_^

This is a nice start to your story. There are a lot of different places you can go with the plot. It would be interesting to see the point in the story where Severus and Remus broke off whatever relationship they seem to be initiating in \"Severus\' Past\", and why. I say this because obviousl the the books they\'re not involved with each other. So any little relationship they develop would have to end at some point. It would help if you could get someone to beta for you (proof your word usage). I don\'t know if English is your first language or not, but the grammer could use a little work. You\'ve got a good imagination. You should continue with the story. I\'ll watch for more to see where you take this.

Puh-leez, go on with the story, I *want* to know what will happen to Sevy ! The beginning was great !!

Very cute !! I like it ! ^___^

Add new chapters please ! It's very good !