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Still having trouble accessing my email account! So I decided to send you a short ew hew here! I loved the new chapter, despite the things you do to poor Severus. But Lucius and Severus are so great, in charcater and all...you know how I like my Luc, don\'t you!? I agree with rahela, some TLC for Severus would be nice, esp. adminstered by Lucius, but know my evil els poor Lucius will have to wait!

Thanks for ch. 10! I think your Lucius and Snape are excellent- they stay in charecter, but still care about (love?) each other. In most fanfuciuucius usually ends up either being a caricature of evil, or so sweet he isn\'t anything like canon Lucius. Here he\'s perfect. Maybe you could give them another intimate seen? I\'m sure they would appreciate it too...Sev deserves something nice after all that Cruciatus ;)

Please write ch.10!!! I can\'t wait for it! This is a great fic!

Chills are good! Please keep going.. ::drools at Lucius:: Yep. ^^

hi,

nice work. More! I wanna see a happily married Lucius-Severus :))) OK, that is too much to ask for..
But is the divorce legal? And what will happen to Narcissa?
And the dark lord is alive? I mean, or heros are deatheaters... And Severus is a spy. And Lucius isn\'t.
Don\'t kill the cunning and beautiful Lucius Malfoy! Please?
-Kira-

Ahhh! Two new chapters, how could I miss two chapters!? I feel awful for not reviewing the second one...Severus musing was just great, and the brilliant plan he came up with. Still I am glad he didn\'t follow through with it, because what he came up with instead was just delicious! Don\'t think either of the two thought that the evening would turn out that way...but they definately have no need to complain. Nor do I as your devoted reader! And the end with Narcissa that was just amng, ng, just how imagined her relationship with Lucius. And Severus is his charming self pointing that out to her.
Well done, I can\'t wait to read more. On another note are you going to write an sequel to \"the bet\", Lucius should have his revenge, don\'t you think!?

Ahhh two new chapters, how could I miss two chapters!? I feel so bad for not reviewing the second one. Severus musing was just great, and the plan he came out with. Quite the inventer isn\'t he!? But I m actually happy that he did not follow through with that plan. What he came with instead was so delicious. I guess the two didn\'t imaging the evening to end that way, but they surely had no reason to complain. Nor have I as your reader! And the scene between Narcissa and Severus, brilliant, beating her at her own game!
WEll done, I can\'t wait to read more.
On another note, are you going to write a sequel to \"The Bet\", Lucius should have his revenge, don\'t you think!? That story was great, I would have never thought about this, poor Luicus, working like some Muggle

I really like the beginning, first I was a little sceptical about the Dumbledore Lucius part, oh but the idea with the snake and the lion that was-hate quoting a Gryffindor- bloody brilliant! I can\'t wait to see where you are taking this, please update soon!?