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for Path of the serpent

by ejab

person Phobos
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really do hope you have a secuel coming up, or I would be so displeased that I would actually go and hunt you down.
That said, I think I must answere now.
I\'m glad you clarified the \"Slithering/Griffindor\" issue, it really helped alot.
I don
person Bergie
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEE! He fainted! Sweet! *giggles* Sweet! A new chapter, and right before christmas! Cool! Anyways, so what\'s gonna happen to Lupin? (please don\'t kill him!) Keep up the good work *and impeccable grammar* (that\'s rare now-a-days)

Cheers,

Bergie.
person winterraven
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the story and plotline. keep up the great work. ;)
person Bergie
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA!!!! After what, a month of waiting? and ANOTHER chapet is almost out!? WOOT! DANCEDANCE!!!!!!!

YAY!

Cheers!

Bergie

PS: You rock, keep it up!
person War-chan
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW......!!! This took me some time to read but WOW! I haven\'t read a (HP) stroy this good scents \'Phoenix Song\' an DM/HP story by....umm....can\'t remember the authur\'s name, damn...oh well. But I LOVE your story this is a true pisce of art! Can\'t what for the next chpt.!!!! I hope that theres a way to make a SS/LM/RL, thouh I think \'L\' is a \'lil\' too....ummm...portacive (most of my sp sucks so bare with me. sorry!) and this coming out to be one hellva battle between \'L\' and \'R\'! ^_^
I CAN\'T WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE SO PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ja ne
BigFan
Miss War-chan
person Phobos
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me again, here, waiting, being SO patient (as if!) for you to continue the stroty..
Seems that threating you does work, so I guess I'll do it again ;)
But befor ethat, I do have a quesstion to ask:
In the firts chapters, it seems like Snape is actually a Griffindor (Lucius and the lion-biten-by-a-snake figurine, the way Snape reacts at it). Is it just my misundertanding of english?
Now back to the threats... I dare, and I do, becuase I represent all of us readers who get annoed when a writer does not finish their work. And you, my dear, are behind schedule *wiggles some papers with dates in front of your face*
Sooostarstart writing or get hexed ;)
person Phobos
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A superb pice of work. You sure have talent!
I love the way Lucius and Severus act, you tottaly block away the mushy crap that other put on them. No OOC on behalf of most of the characters, and a brilliant plot (although you never told us what happened with the new teacher, bad you *pouts*).
More soon? Or will I have to show you some dark curses fisrsthanded? ;)
person Orphelia Malfoy
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter, great as always! I'm having computer problems but I'll get back to you with a long review+email asap Sunny
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story totally rocks my world...hehe. I can't wait to see what will happen to Lucius and Severus. Will one of them get pregnant? It's great, so please keep it coming!
person Anon
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! just discovered this and well wow!
I adore the love story of Severus and Lucius painful and bloody as it should be, and amazingly all in character.
please update soon!!