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person ShagsTheDustmop
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, go Neville, you big stud! I always knew he had hidden talents... I wonder who taught him (Sprout?)
person LilyMalfoy
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. Hmmm... never knew Neville was such a sex god. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person jenn
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aw! i do adore neville, even more so now after order of the phoenix, because he can suddenly take charge and kick ass. :) and i certainly enjoyed the way you portrayed him... oh hell yes i did. :) and now i eagerly await the next chapter.
person Michelline
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whew! You go! This is great so far. Can\'t wait to see who the next encounter is with... ;)-+
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Hermione! Neither Harry nor Ron wanted to be her f*** buddy? That\'s odd. Well, I am sure that you will remedy that soon enough. Who do you have in mind?
person magdellin
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I found this through WIKTT. Nice one so far. Poor Hermione, being stood up like that. Please write more!
person Ira
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL - looking good..but I hope she gets some action too! ;-)
person Helena
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, Iwant moooooooooooooooooooooooore !!!!!!
Hurry up, I\'m dying to read more!! Great job!!!!
person Rosmerta
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEE! Great beginning!
person LilyMalfoy
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL. This is an interesting start. At first I thought she was going to walk in on Harry and Ron shagging each other. But I guess this works too.