rate_review Reviews

Wow! Very intense and very interestinometomething new and original. one of the best things i have read for a long time.

My only criticism is a minor one about spacing. it is a little hard to read the story as there isnt spacing between the paragraphs, although in some ways that adds to the story - makes the text seem as divorced from reality as the characters.

i dont know if you meant to leave it hanging, or whether you wanted to make it clear. does he wake up?

Loved the \"disjointed\" style of writing. It pulls the reader into the madness and kind of takes the reader on the journey. Haunting and scary. Lovely. Truly. :)

i\'m drained. this was beautiful. awful. confusing. horrifying. lovely.

i will have to re-read this and battle to understand (if that\'s even the right word) the beginning. maybe it would be better to just read and let the words flow over me, in their own mad way.

i\'m afraid some people may choose to leave your amazing story before it has had a chance to work its magic. more the fool they.

thank you for this gift.

I have read this y...y.....I grieve, I cry and I howl. A very excellent story. I will say no more.

Beautiful and haunting and scary. I love it.

Have you touched madness? Somehow I think that only those who have touched it can write it well. So far so good! I eager await more!

interesting start. keep hold of the reins as your story drags you and keep posting...

very dark (no pun intended), very descriptive, and very ... confusing. hope the madness breaks enough for them to connect, somehow -- thoughts? touch? vision?