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You wrote an equisite dark fic,I read it recently,after you`d finished and was absolutely both engrossed and impressed,very interesting style and whole idea of the story,tormenting and exhausting for the reader,yet ovehelming the mind and making me touchy and compassionate as well,it was sometimes hard to read,involving my own imagination,inventing all of facou`vou`ve only sketched.Honestly,I enjoyed the story very much and,obviously-want to see the continuation as soon as possible if only you were able and willing to create the next installments.So,now the only thing I should do is to add your name to my top list of the most desirably checked fics` authors at all.

I\'m afraid that my desire to know is overcoming my common sense. Please write a sequel. I have really enjoyed this story, even the confusing bits.

I don\'t know if a sequel is necessary. Hope remains at the end of the garden. Hope withoutsequsequences of a messy future for our two heroes.
Personally, I look forward to your next work. E-mail me before you post it so I can watch out for it.

I know what you mean about reviews - I love them as well.

I think you should do a sequel. I can understand that you may be nervous of attempting one, particularly if this fiction just burst out of you. I know thats how mine happen - I turn it over and over in my mind, and then whoomph write it al out in an hour or so.

But if you can feel the plot bunny moving, that might happen. You won\'t know until you try. It may not turn out as well as the Garden, it may turn out better you never know until you try. But you have to keep trying as an author. Even if the sequel \'fails\' you will learn something from that as well.

do i want a sl? l? i am aware of the danger of wishing without careful consideration. rather like bringing the gods\' attention to oneself back in ancient greece -- you may be blessed, but usually at an unacceptably high price.

i don\'t know if i want to find out what life for severus and hermione you have outlined, given all they\'ve been through already. i do know, however, that i want to read more from you. perhaps you can tranquilize that plot bunny from hell that\'s been tormenting you and try your hand at another story. having been possessed by demanding plot rodents (mine are never cute enough to be bunnies), i doubt that\'s easily done.

i will trust you to writat nat needs writing, whether it\'s a journey out of (or deeper into) the garden or \"hermione\'s and severus\' potions for dummies\". and i will read it, whatever story you bring.

Right back at ya, Michelle. It was aficuficult read, but a worthwhile one.

The tone of this story is deliciously dark and sadistic. I wonder at the ending- write the sequel! I have no clue what I\'m asking for, believe me that I\'m informed! Your writing is better than crack cocaine.

This was....fantastic. I guess that\'s the best word I can come up with at the moment. Shellshock really doesn\'t do much for my mental thesaurus. It\'s fabulously written and I do want a sequel. In fact, I can\'t wait. Thank you.
-jo

Sob!!! That was so beautiful! I am actually tearing up. Why is it that Severus\'s sacrifices always get to me? It was just a lovely fic. I even got the \"stream of consciousness\" style that you had... Thanks for the fic.

Great story!
It\'s so sad. You make me cry a lot (I\'m drowning in tears). The madness you express is not only in the words you wrote but in the way you wrote the story in a whole. I got trap in the madness and I enjoyed it while reading. Now my soul is suffocating. (don\'t get me wrong, I like the feeling) You definitely achieve what you were looking for... congratulations for that!
I love your story... I can\'t stop crying...