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by jadeokelani

person Shooby
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very well-written fic, and I really enjoyed reading it. I liked that it wasn\'t total smut, but you didn\'t make TEENAGERS completely harmless and innocent, either. I give you a great big slap on the back. :-D
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story!
person Draco luvr
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so funny!

I love the ending!

Wow, that was great~
person Bethesudde
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous! Bloody fucking Marvelous! You probably won\'t write one, but I\'m begging you for a sequal anyways! I absolutly love Ginny and Draco in your story, you pulled them off exactly right! Write a sequal! Please?
person Jez
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! i love the way that most of the story was written in formform of Harry explaining the events to the teachers and i love the way you got all the houses together in a believable way. it was a really great story.
person Kat Pryde
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, there! I liked your story! It was actually quite funny... so, here\'s my question. And don\'t take this as an insult: CAN I PEEEEEEEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE MST this fic? PLEASE??? PLEASE??? I mean, I\'m down on my knees here. *Gets down on knees* PLEASE??? I really think that this one could be hilarious. Just think: Ron, Hermione, Harry, Draco and maybe Oliver Wood all MSTing your fic!! PLEASE???
person Steph
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is HILARIOUS. It\'s good to read something funny and sexy at the same time. though i would have liked to seen some action between harry and hermione.
person Renee
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely hilariuos!!! Loved your style - the whole interigation thing. Very unique.
person Azkaban_convict_202
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good! It was interesting that at first you were writing asd if you were HArry. After awhile it wen into the normal dialogue. It\'s would be interesting if you re wrote the second part and make it as the first. just a suggestion. Vero.Yoo.You don;t normally see Draco/Ginny fics. Good job. Kepp writng!
person Moonbeam
schedule December 23, 2002 at 12:00 AM
This was fabulous, the final alliteration and the Romeo and Juliet bit were so bloody hilarious.
Keep up the fabulous writing, but the muggle london incident was that in another story or were we just supposed to accept it all?
Toodles
Moonbeam