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for White Flower; Black Dragon

by lilyadar

person shemhamforash
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn! I thought for a moment that she didn\'t want him and he had gone psychotic...*shudders*..Personally, if I had Sev wanting me like that, my husband (even though I am now single) could go fuck himself with a shovel...I am not exactly the world\'s most moralistic person, and I freely admit it.

So yeah...Bring on the extra-marrital affair, and lucius can go to hell...

But that is just me...

much respect, waiting for the next patiently (kinda)

Shem xxx
person shemhamforash
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAH! AGAIN! What a truly evil place to leave me hanging...ARGH! I am absolutely adoring Sev\'s inner musings...beutifully scripted again m\'dear..keep it up! Ad Gods do I hope that she doesn\'t turn him down...*fingers crossing as we speak. ..umm...write...ahhh...read....communicate*

Looking forward to the next...

Shem xxx
person Helena
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that Snape\'s going to kick Malfoy\'s ass!!!
Our Snape is soooooooooooooooooooooo much more desireble!!!
Keep up the excellent work!!!
person shemhamforash
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Absolutely beautiful! Never would I have imagined I would be on the sidelines egging Narcissa of all people into Sev\'s life.....But here I am, mourning for him, and praying to whatever God he does that they will have their together.

Anxiously await the next update...wonderful job!

Shem xxx
person Yawn
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, getting good here. I\'m rooting for Snape to \'bump\' Lucius off to get Narcissa. Hey, people die in accidents all the time! Please update soon. ^_~
person Rilla
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this looks very promising. Looking forward to seeing where you take it!
person Yawn
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So good so far! Snape and Narcissa, huh? I can dig it, especially like the cheating underneath Lucius nose aspect.
person shemhamforash
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok...everyone knows I am SS/HG to the core...but you have composed a beautiful setfor for angst and desire within this fic, and I intend to carry on reading and reviewing as long as you continue with this.

It is also a most interesting spin as to why Sevvie joined the DE. Loved it...beautifully scrpited. Truly.

I received the email you sent today and will be replying out of my duty as a beta lest I fail me duty to you...

Give theiewsiews time, it will take some time considering you are an unknown, but with a piece such as this, I do believe they will flood you.

Keep up doing what you are doing...

Much respect...

Shem xxx