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for White Flower; Black Dragon

by lilyadar

person Yawning
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whew, that was a close call! The scene with Dumbledore was good, that mans must be psychic. Wonderful story. ^_^
person shemhamforash
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!..You did beautifully Lily. Truly. I was more than a little impressed. Once again magically scripted, and with a tenderness that has become apparent through you tale thus far.

I am sorry about this afternoon. Msn decided to shut down on me and I wasn\'t at my desk to get the warning to let you know. By the time it got back up you were gone. But really, you did spectacularly by yourself.

As always I am patiently waiting for the next installment.

Much respect

Shem xxx

person Yawning
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No! Don\'t let them get get busted! They finally made love and it was equal parts romance/smutty goodness. Man, what a place to leave off on. I think you enjoy tortmenting your readers. ^_^
person Yawning
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah! You\'re cruel! What a place to leoff.off. Excellent update. Smut or not, the sexual tension smokes up my computer screen. And I\'m still crossing my fingers Snape finds a way to get Lucius out of the picture... Hopefully in coffin form. ^_~
person shemhamforash
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Evil! Beautifully scripted, but so damn evil. Am aroused by Sev\'s assertivness,and his desire to claim what he wants, even if it means leaving Lucius to hang.

Well done. Perfect ongaingain.

Awaiting the next.

Shem xxx
person Rilla
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
{hoping that the next chapter is smutty} e che characters are fantastic - so layered and believable. Love it.
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another brilliant chapter! I\'m looking very forward to the next. I\'d hate to see what would happen if Sir Malfoy walked in!
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliance! This is one of my favorite ships actually, I\'m not sure why. This is really well written. Please email me for updates!
person Yawn
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I felt bad for Severus when she asked about the party! I was so hoping it was a declaration of love. Darn! Well, I\'ll just have to stay tuned for the next chapter. Killer updates as always. ^_~
person Helena
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yes!ibet she will!!!! She\'s not stupid!! Lol..
keep up the terrific work, great chapter this one!!