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for White Flower; Black Dragon

by lilyadar

person Anon
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I never would imagined Snape and Narcissa as a couple, but I sure do now. Terrible as I am, I\'m hoping Lucius gets himself accidently killed or unaccidently. =)
person Yawning
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Snickers* Adultry was never more fun! Yea for Snape and Narcissa. I\'ll bet the party will be an interesting read. ^_^
person Roni Black
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was great. Please update soon! I can\'t wait to read more.
person Yawning
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment. I do enjoy this story. One of my favorite lines in this chapter...Mr. and Mrs. Snape...has a nice ring to it doesn\'t it? ^_^
person shiv5468
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this and I hope that you will update soon. You can\'t help thinking that it is all going to end very badly for poor Severus thoupartparticularly now that Draco is involved.
person Roni Black
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was amazing. I just loved it, I really did! I\'ve been looking for so long for a good Narcissa/Snape fic, and I haven\'t found one. That\'s why I was so happy to find this one. And your story is not just another story, only about pairing I like. It\'s also written beautifully, just like a story should be written. Excellent job, keep it up.
person shemhamforash
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*rushes into review, panting and relieved to have made it... finally!*... Nicely done Lily... the POV changes worked well, and once again you have composed almost poetic prose... Beautiful.. absolutley perfect.. looking forward to the next, as always...

much respect...

Shem
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a beautiful story. you do the imagery quite well, and the love scene is done tastefully. i\'ll look for an update. nice work
person Yawning
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
CAUGHT! And by Draco?! How the hell can they explain their way ou tha that situation? Update soon, please! Dying to see how Draco reacts. ^_~
person shemhamforash
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh shite...bloody ferret face would have to walk in now wouldn\'t he?..Once again beautifully composed. You have a magical talent for description and emotion that is intelligent, peaceful and yet arousing all at once.

I look forward to the next as always.

Shem xxx