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for Our Winter

by jadeokelani

person Kali
schedule December 24, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just finished reading our winter, and wow is all i have to say. you portrayed the charachters so well, and the introduction of ezra was perfect. I did cry at the end. i read the entire last chapter aloud, because it was written so beautifully and musically. it just begged to be recited. this si honestly one of the best draco stories i have ever read. the whole thing with going into the forbidden forest at the end of your sixth year, and dumbledore disappearing in a flash of light with parallels to king arthur, and draco being the troll! i just loved it. I need a sequel or something!! well, actually, i dont, because you finished that ending so incredibly well. ezra and seamus, and seamus being danae's dad, and ezra being alive . . i tell you i did cry! incredible piece of work here.
person Kabal
schedule December 18, 2002 at 12:00 AM
eeck ! I forgot the address of the site in the other review : http://fanfiction.portkey.org :)
person Rane
schedule December 11, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Oh bloody hell...beautiful,simply beautiful.Albus death made me cry harder than I've cried for a long time.Thank you for that.
person Hira
schedule December 7, 2002 at 12:00 AM
This stor abs absolutely the best HP fanfic I've ever read!It leaves me feeling almost as though I've read another one of the books.The characters keep themselves rather well,and the plot kept me up all night reading until the end.I feel I'm about to reread it,and I thank you for writing it.
person QueenIofIWinter
schedule December 6, 2002 at 12:00 AM
One word: Wow! Wonderful story! I started reading, and I couldn't stop.
person Kati
schedule December 5, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I\'ve read good stories, great stories, even excellent stories, stories that have made me laugh, cry, and have touched my heart in unspeakable ways. But nothing, absolutely NOTHING got under my skin like this story did. The characters and emotions were so real. I felt myself feeling sympathy and anguish for Draco and Ginny\'s forbidden love. Truly a Romeo-and-Juliet-esque story. Of course I cried, I was crying throughout the entire story. For the first time, I felt I could truly relate to the characters and their situation (I myself have never had a situation like this, but I know what it feels like when you can\'t be with the one you love). People say unrequited love is the worst thing ever, but I don\'t believe that. To have reciprocated love and be unable to truly embrace it is worse than love unreturned (ugh, I sound like a wannabe Shakesperean poet there).

The condom/banana chapter was wonderfully y. y. You are one of the few authors that know where humor is appropriate and does not detract from the overall story. The same goes for the sex scences, which served to only add to the angf thf the story by emphasizing the ever-growing love between Ginny and Draco.

I don\'t really know what else to sor tor this review. What can I say about a story that\'s made me laugh, cry, and given me chills all at the same time? Ack, this is why I never review stories anymore!!! I guess all I can really say is if all of your stories are like this, you will have a lot more compliments coming your way. :)

Your ever-loving, touched, and truly inspired fan (I\'m not sucking up, I swear!)
Katie

~Love is something that\'s so easy to fall into and so hard to fall out of.-me~