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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really great! but there seems to be a screw-up in the chapters... it seems to be like a repeat like three times. Ithink you may have accidently double-posted it.. or triple-posted it at the same time. ^.^;; I think you better fix it..
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good so far, but you should know you have the same chapter going two more times
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo......Antici-------pation! LOL What a place to leave it! Please continue to write!
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
okay so there is like 3 posts of chapter 3 here... and i was all thinking that maybe there were three diff. chapters with the same name.... but now this is like a super duper cliffy.... and ARGH! I want more.... please post more soon... well more diff chapters.. not more of the same chapters....
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue writing the story. I love Snape/Harry pairings. Talk about a cliffhanger. I wanna see if Harry gets his kiss. Are you aware ou put chapter three up three times?
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Snape in leather pants!! Rowr!! Great start, can\'t wait to see what happens!!
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*gets down on knees and begs for longer and naughtier chapters* This is a really really good beginning. The chapters are short though - they tease instead of ensnare... And speaking strictly as a perv - I\'d love to see this get a touch naughtier than an R rating.
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on! You\'re just going to leave it hang *there*?? OMG! More.....you are simply going to have to write more! That\'s all there is to it! LOL
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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
tee hee..club fun! Write more...this could
be interesting!
be interesting!