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for Tel\' Lindar (The Bard)

by ZeDrippyVessel

schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chaptr! I loved the en while Snape was trying to sleep but couldn\'t fin a place that those two hadn\'t had sex. It was hilarious! I can\'t wait to read more. Please update again soon.

Tiffany
person Serenityblack2000
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Very Very Good. I just love it as much as EV. I Know what neithadol means heehee heeehee (laughing like beevis) Great chappie!

Severus needs to get his head out of his ass and smell the roses! (pun intended)

Can\'t wait to read more. But have to go to work. I did consider calling in and reading the rest right now but........


Later.
sb
person Serenityblack2000
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Talk about getting your ass stuck in the chair. I like how she would move around the room, get settled and he would zip her right back.
Still Laughing my ass off!! And Celeborn! MMMMMMM I can imagine him in those leather pants on that Harley. What a picture that makes.

Must ... Read... More.... now !

Tah!

SB
person Serenityblack2000
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please do not take this as a flame!! I would never do that but I do have one thing to say HALDIR??!! HOW COULD YOU??!!

Ok That is off my chest. I will miss him extremely! I understand that the Muses have deemed it to be and will accept that.

I have read The Empty Vessel. I loved it very much (not sure if you remember me reviewing it) Anyway..... I just completed your first chapter and after shedding a few tears (Yes I cried for Hal) It touched my heart their parting scene, I must say that I have throughly enjoyed this first chapter and cannot wait to read the rest. If this fic is half as good as I imagine, I will love it also.

The concept of ole Sevvi-kins having to try to handle Tel\' Lindar is priceless. I am sure there will be laughs all around. He really does have his work cut out for him this time. HP and company are my second love (My first being LOTR) It will be quite interesting in seeing how this unfolds. I have read all of JK\'s HP Novels and look foward to seeing how you have crossed them over.

Keep up the good work ............. Namarrie .... SB
person Serenityblack2000
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Most Excellant!! Now this is what I am talking about!! LOL SMUT the dragon! It had slipped my mind about SMUT!! Damn funny, I just loved his name.
Severus still has no clue! Hee Hee Hee Has his work cut out. I think I know who has that bow.. are the initials LM?? Has to be. will Have to wait until
tomarrow to read more.

(I know that blond hair from somewhere.....)

Namarrie.....SB
person mother
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still love it. Update please!
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter! I love it how she really stuck it to Fudge! I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!

Tiff.

p.s. If it\'s not Voldemort than who? I can\'t wait to find out.
person Book Lover
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Found you through God Awful Fan Fiction.

They either don\'t get it or hor horribly jealous! This is wonderful, fabulous stuff and I am hooked on Bronwyn! Maddening creature, but what verve! She is no ordinary Sue (or any I can figure out) and I\'m glad she has strong Elves/Wizards to keep her in line.

I can\'t wait for more!
person Windy Blossom
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I do like your writing style and you are a good storllerller, but I have to say that I absolutely despise Bronwyn. She\'s a lot like typical romance novel women, which I don\'t care for. I\'m not trying to insulting because I do like the story, but she really annoys me.

Only problem I have with Tel\' Lindar is the massive amount of dreams/flashbacks. It\'s getting hard to keep up with and is taxing to read. I\'d like to see it more \"in the present\".

I\'m not trying to be rude because you really do have a great deal of talent. It\'s just a matter of my personal taste when it comes to female characters!

I\'m not leaving an email for fear of getting slammed, but it\'s just an opinion. Not meant to be rude!

WB
person hawaii
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Started EV last night and finished Tel Lindar today. Read them as much as possible all day long (ever read and drive?). They were both terrific, though i especially liked Tel Lindar. Your OC is quite a handful and I loved her modday day attitude problem mixed with her ancient wisdom. I also liked the way that though Snape tried repeatedly to get the upper hand, he never really did. She and he may have found their own peace, but not at the expense of her personality. Very creative too how you intertwine the Elves into the HP world and the dream visits. Good use of Remus and I love Amadeus. All around awesome read. Looking foward to all your coming chapters.