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I really like this fic-will you be continuing? I really like the wall of denial! Please update!

It\'s really good for your first fic. I hope to read the second chapter soon and keep up the good work.

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hey there! well, i hope you haven\'t given up on checking your reviews since i like the story and would like for you to continue writting it. if you\'ve given up writting it i would like for you to please e-mail me and let me know so i don\'t keep uselessly checking for updates. by the way, i do believe that no matter what people say you should never give up on a story ( i know that with negative comments may be difficult, but since i don\'t see any reason for them... ) because practice makes perfect can\'t be more rea when it comes to math and writting. and if this is one of your first fics, don\'t stop writting even if you would rather begin something else. people usually start much, much worse than you and are able to get very far. hope to see new chapters up soon!! ^.^

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! the stories great please PLEASE please PLEASE !!!!!!! write more please

Hmm. You write well as far as grammar/spelling are concerned. But the story starts a bit abruptly... I\'m certainly interested in finding out the background and reasoning behind Snape\'s sudden need for a transfusion (not to mention the difference between Muggle and Magical).

So... Snape needs a transfusion. Harry thinks Snape is hot. And he\'s afraid to give blood.
So many questions... I do hope you\'ll continue.

Well it looks like a good start. You should try to make it longer if you could, if that\'s not possible then oh well. You seem to have a great idea, from all the others i\'ve seen this one has aiginiginal thought. If you could keep writing please do. Also if you don\'t get a lot of rev, i\, i\'m not sure really how much you have now but, don\'t get frustrated or anything. I write a lot too and I\'t \'t get many reviews, FanFics to me are a sort of vent or enjoyment. Well I think you could be a great writter if you put you mind to it.


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