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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story!I\'d never think of Severus as a martial kind of guy!And Hermione!!
It is a great idea!
But i think that some tecnical terms in japonese should be done!
Severus is a man of calling the things by it\'s real names.
Hope you can update soon.
It is a great idea!
But i think that some tecnical terms in japonese should be done!
Severus is a man of calling the things by it\'s real names.
Hope you can update soon.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry that i had apptly tly missed your previous update. I do not get to the computer as often as i would like and I love your story. I question whe Sev Sev would move this soon but doubtless he feels that there is no time like the present. hehe After all....why should he not now live life to it\'s fullest? *sigh* It can be argued back and forth I suppose. hehe i look for ward to the next installment!
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sev seems remarkably angst-free about chasing after an eighteen year old girl. It\'s a rather refreshingly different take on him. I am waiting to see where you go with this. Keep it up.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh this looks to be so good! Hehe I can\'t wait for 9 o clock in the tower. I dont think they can either! ^_^
Keep writing,
Laerai
Keep writing,
Laerai
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YES! Absolutely, I don\'t mind AT ALL of your descriptions of our naked Snape (hmmmm.....)!!
keep up the excelent work!!
keep up the excelent work!!
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great new story. The sparks that are starting are great - although I don\'t really understand what happened to his hair and how the pendant showed with his potion master high neck - many buttons - attire. Probably just scanning too fast for the sparks. They really are good.
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, Snape walking naked (andaty.aty...) trough the bedroom, Good Lord, what a site!!!!!!
dear Sev I\'m becoming very impressed with your stories! LOL!
Keep up posting, I\'m already shivering of excitement........
dear Sev I\'m becoming very impressed with your stories! LOL!
Keep up posting, I\'m already shivering of excitement........
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning!! I look forward to the rest of the story avidly!! You have the two repressed (in canon) intellectuals of Hogwart\'s \'letting down their hair\' (on literally--ha!). And then kick-boxing lessons... yum.... Affectionately, -E-
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Neville is such a convienent foil, isn\'t he? I mean in fanfiction especially, he has caused more havoc than Murphy.
As a slobbering fool of a Rickman fan, I can just hear Severus snarking out his lines as you write them. I like your characterizations very much.
I studied Aiki-Jujitsu myself and Bo staff, so I am a little prejudiced towards the martial arts.
As a slobbering fool of a Rickman fan, I can just hear Severus snarking out his lines as you write them. I like your characterizations very much.
I studied Aiki-Jujitsu myself and Bo staff, so I am a little prejudiced towards the martial arts.
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Please update soon. I can\'t wait to finds out what happens next.