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Magnificent manhood? You\'ve been reading romance novels haven\'t you! :)

That was very sweet and I thought you handled it quite nicely. Keep going, I want to see where this goes!

XOXOXOXO

My God! this \"au naturel..\" was completely Hilariou!
Y!
Yeessssss, our Snape aaaaaaaaaaalllll sweaty............all naked.............Good Lord I\'m going to have a stroke, just thinking about it!!!!
What a damn sweat torture.....
keep up the EXCELLENT work!!! I want more, more, more, more, more...

*giggle* Sounds as if he is enjoying himself immensely! Please write more!

lucius malfoy with a rose tatooed on his ass! *rolls on floor laughing* sorry, that just cracked me up! (am weird, i know!)
fabulously written m\'dear, and despite your frequent angsts about not keeping severus in character you\'re doing a damn good job with him i\'d say! :D
i await chapter 5! *hopes it is chapter five, and that she can count*
**Seva***

Bravo! I love it! Encore! MORE! MORE! MORE!

More soon, the voices in my head will be returning soon nee need to keep them occupied!

ciao,
Fish

Oh, Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!! I really looooooooooooved it!!
what a body, (evil grin),muscular too!!! Good God! What a torture (lol)!!
I really hope you continue this excellent work and if I might you could put describe him while he is aaaaaalll sweaty and doing some \"exercise\"???!!! Evil grin....

I like your story alot! And yeah....I kinda figure that that is how Albus would react. Albus seem to me to be a pretty cool guy and after all....Herm by this time is of age as was stated. So no worries! No critisism here. Only anencouragement for you to write more and faster! LOL Alas sometimes one\'s Muse can be very fickle!

Thank you, I am glad that he has thought about the Headmaster and taken steps to be certain neither of them gets in trouble here. I was concerned for both their reputations. :) I liked the Jane Austin bit, I can see him reading them secretly in the dungeons.

Your sexy, sexy Sev is sooo hot he\'s leaving me incoherent *snort*. Yeah, I see him in the same light as Darcy and Rochester too. The secret kickboxing angle, while not new, is a most appropriate way for him to keep fit (and give him a legit excuse to meet w/Herm). LOL! Only thing though, is that I think he was very OOC in the way he lowered his personal barriers to her. That was wayy too quick, IMO. He\'s such a private person and I can\'t see him letting anyone into his confidence quickly. Also, the use of exclamation points! is a little excessive. A /little/ goes a long way. But it\'s a great start. Looking forward to updates ^_^

hu, Hu !!!!!!! Go for it girl,can\'t wait!!!!!!!! Good Lord, what a sight!!!!!!!!
Our sex God in action!! I\'m soitedited....hmmmmm..