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AWSOME!!!! i\'ve read both parts and it\'s brilliant, the way you portrayed the characters was brilliant.... i just luv\'d everyth Ple Please update soon with a trilogy or somethDah

Mmmmm. Yummy. Some of the absolute best Dom!Harry and Sub!Draco I\'ve ever read. I particularly like that, as Harry says, \"It\'s not about force; it\'s about control.\" No whips and chains, nothing painful or even really demeaning. Draco may be subservient, but he\'s a coddled pet--just like the spoiled kid he really is. I also like the slightly dark side of Harry. It\'s very believable; after all, he\'s had very little control over the rest of his life, so it makes sense that he\'d want to keep some part of it aside where he can please himself as *he* wants. I\'m hoping Draco manages to get over his pride and agree to the arrangement--though watching him struggle with it is very realistic as well. I was considering asking for a Harry POV, but on second thought, I\'d actually rather not. He articulates his motives quite clearly while talking with Draco, and it strikes me that most of the actual change in character that takes place in this fic (and its prequel) occurs in Draco. It\'s his struggle with his pride, his initial refusal to accept his inner sub, his absolute shock at discovering the other side of Harry, and therefore his POV. Even if it develops into actual romance at some point, it\'ll still be Draco making most of the adjustments, since I doubt Harry\'s about to go join Voldemort, nor does he have a family to worry about. And he can always explain Draco as a \"d\" d\" Death Eater to his friends and the public, without really going into detail. There\'s no way in hell that Draco will be able to explain this to his father or Voldemort, though, even if it doesn\'t develop into romance. But I\'m getting ahead of myself. Please, please write more soon, or I shall be forced to create fanfic of your universe! And God knows I won\'t be able to come up with anything half as good as your writing. :)

While you\'re story is *certainly* not bad, at a lot of occasions, you had me rolling my eyes. Although I bet a lot of people would disagree, to me both your Harry and Drare are undeniably OOC- so much so, that in a number of scenes, I mentally cringed. Mischief Managed 1 and 2 had a lot of potential but I\'m just not sure whether or not you reached it. I kept waiting for a point where you would redeem yourself in terms of the OOC but it just never happened. Putting that aside though, this is a pretty entertaining fic. Keep up the good work.

Oh, my. I love the dynamic between the boys in this series; I love Dom!Harry in general and the way you have written the tension between the two of them is just absolutely delicious. Please continue; I\'m looking forward to the next in the series.

That was bloody awesome! I cannot wait until you post again. You are simply amazing and there are not woro deo describe my pleasure at fig a g a writer who is so in touch with her characters that she can create such a tapestry of emotions with them.

I am waiting on baited breath for the next release.

Oh dear lord...

You must, by all means necessary, continue writing this story.

It\'s wonderful. I\'m sure more than just myself would appreciate, greatly, if you continued!

It turned /me/ into a pile of goo! -Chuckle- Please, do!

Harry is evil and in contro . . . i like . us. usually you read h/d fics where harry is the sub, but i like harry as the mas. update soon!

Harry is evil and in control . . . i like that. usually you read h/d fics where harry is the sub, but i like harry as the mas. update soon!

The end? What do you mean

ohh ohh
sequel please!!!!
with draco\'s acceptance
loved this story and the one before it
creative and well written a most enjoyable read
the images running through my mind while reading it....
im lucky i didnt short circuit the keyboard from ahe dhe drool!!!