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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was bloody awsom you are continuing it in like a sequal or something right??
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! So funny and sexy...though really harry does get annoying sometimes. Please update as pronto as possble! LOL I wonder our our kids know you write this. Hehe i wish you were mm LOm LOL shes your age, unfortunatedly her intrests are ...different. Anyway i posted this on my favs, so ill be checking up frequently. DON'T KEEP ME WAITING TOO LONG!!!
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay now I know that you wrote The End (for now) in the last chapter, but are there further chapters planned for this story or another sequel perhaps? I hope to Merlin there are because I love this story and it's premise. Please e-mail me if there is another sequel or something in the works on another site or if you update. Thank you.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was great. The ending was especially powerful. I like how you played up the power behind words.
If you decidewritwrite more on this, I will definitely read up on it.
If you decidewritwrite more on this, I will definitely read up on it.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The two Mischief Managed, ..., they are ..., truthfully magnificient. Will you make a third? The slow, or not so slow, descent of Draco Malfoy in submission is so beautifully written. I will be happy to read everything yoe wie willing to write. You have talent. Please continue.
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The end? But I want more! Are you planning on writing a sequel? \'Cause you should. Please continue!
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just reread this for the umpteenth time and wanted to let you know how much I love it. I\'m really looking forward to the next story!
There\'s a detail that\'s really bugging me, though, in chapter 2.
When Blaise is describing the need for a safeword to Draco, he goes:
\"And then, he pulls back, stands above you and pulls his wand.\"
\"What?!\" Draco exclaimed, rudely wrenched from the delightful fantasy.
This seems very off. A wand isn\'t just a weapon. Why would a wizard flinch when someone pulled a wand on them? It isn\'t a gun! (even though that wording \"to pull it on someone,\" can suggest that association) Maybe I\'ve been reading too many fanfics, but I should think that wand use would be very common during sex among wizards; there\'d be no reason for Draco to assume that Harry was about to cast cruciatus on him, rather than, say, tie him to bedposts :D
Like I said, it\'s a detail, but it really throws me out of the \"wizarding world\" setting.
There\'s a detail that\'s really bugging me, though, in chapter 2.
When Blaise is describing the need for a safeword to Draco, he goes:
\"And then, he pulls back, stands above you and pulls his wand.\"
\"What?!\" Draco exclaimed, rudely wrenched from the delightful fantasy.
This seems very off. A wand isn\'t just a weapon. Why would a wizard flinch when someone pulled a wand on them? It isn\'t a gun! (even though that wording \"to pull it on someone,\" can suggest that association) Maybe I\'ve been reading too many fanfics, but I should think that wand use would be very common during sex among wizards; there\'d be no reason for Draco to assume that Harry was about to cast cruciatus on him, rather than, say, tie him to bedposts :D
Like I said, it\'s a detail, but it really throws me out of the \"wizarding world\" setting.
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story, both it and the one before it. Makes me feel sad that I didn\'t dver ver it a lot sooner. It was absolutely wonderful.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How come you haven\'t updated i love your story!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So did Draco take Harry up on the offer? Are they found out? What happens? Does Draco come to enjoy being someone\'s pet? So much so that he wants Harry to \"own \" him for life? PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! I would really like to see where this story line goes to and where it would end!!!
Eagerly wanting more,
Merrideth
Eagerly wanting more,
Merrideth