rate_review Reviews

great story.  fluffy but hot lemons.  characters are OOC. 

I'm glad there's a sequel but it does read as a complete story on it's own

I loved loved loved this story!

Hey there!

Just wanted to let you know that I simply adored your story!
You are a very talented writer and I think it's wonderful how you outline all the details
and finished all strings you started throughout the story :)

I'm looking forward to read the sequel and hopefully more of your stories :)
Have a great day!
Coraeli

This is a really good story but I feel there is something missing from it. There's seems to be little to no conflict, issue to resove, danger to overcome, lession to learn. You have them as animagi but you emphisis little on the excitment of it. It's more of a prop for situations not a situation in it self that they have to deal with. I love this couple above all others and I feel dissipointed when I read a story that throughout it promisis so much but delivers so little. They are arch !!!enemies!!! who fall in love. Go wild with it. That in iself is a conflict from the very beginning that should have been an issue till the vary end if not in a very minor part. The only tension in the who thing is sexual and thats too almost too quickly resulved. I'm going to continue to look for future works of yours cause I'm positive your going to deliver something amazing evenually an I really want to read it when you do. Good luck and keep writing.

What an amazing story. Only one critique though, the spelling kinda threw off the flow, but overall I love it.

Great story :)

This is a great story, I can't wait till you get the last few chapters up.

i adored this story

Wow, that was absolutely GREAT! I loved it, all of it. You did a wonderful job. The club scene was fun, the Truth or Dare game, well, way more advanced than I ever remember ;) I thought for sure Harry & Ron would have said something rather than sit there watching Hermione blow Draco, I guess they were 'distracted' at the time with their own pleasure inducing gf's!
Hermione playing Quidditch was fun, never read a story with her doing that. Sweet moments between the parents (both Narcissa and Grangers) and to top it off with Strawberries and Cream, D-Lish!
The ending was just beautiful. Off to check out the sequel.
Bravo!

This is a damn good story. I cannot wait to start reading more of your stuff. You are a wonderful writer.