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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Severus in glasses ??? Mighty pleased when i read that , it makes him look even more studious. Great work Rose!! You played up Severus to be an adorable , vulnerable character, but still with a hint of his nastiness...just as i love him ! Keep him that way !
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice fast update. Good onya.
Very interesting chapter - you handled it well, Snape is still a bit vulnerable and Theda seems properly torn between wanting the boy wan wanting to do the right thing. I like that she still has his jumper. And I was touched that she remembered -for him - that he was still wearing his glasses.
Very interesting chapter - you handled it well, Snape is still a bit vulnerable and Theda seems properly torn between wanting the boy wan wanting to do the right thing. I like that she still has his jumper. And I was touched that she remembered -for him - that he was still wearing his glasses.
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how sweet! I looooove the idea of him in glasses!! Thanks for that kiss (the tongue, esp.). You\'ve written young Severus so cute. I imagine a younger, shorter version of Alan as Tybalt in Romeo & Juliet. I want her to jump his bones so badly, and I would love it if she were his first time. That would be so adorable, if you could write that. Love the story, dear!