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Oooooh, twisty Slytheriny goodness! I love it!

THAT IS JUST SO NOT FAIR, YOU CAN'T JUST STOP THERE AND LEAVE US HANGING!! I AM GOING TO DIE WAITING FOR YOU TO POST AND I JUST STARTED READING IT LAST NIGHT AND COULD NOT STOP!! I LOVE THIS STORY! Love Citten
P.S. Please don't take too long in getting up the next chapter, and please have merice and dont have a cliffy!

It took me some time to finish reading your chapters, and for a while I was unsure which one of the Slytherins I hoped she ended up with. Draco would have been good, Severus too, but your Hermione is set on Lucius, and I must agree with her. Sad that Draco cannot have children, I suppose that is a done deal? I will be waiting for more, although you do seem to be very busy with your life. At least you haven\'t given up on them.

I agree, when I was a teen my affections changed almost instantly...multiple times a day on occasion. This wasn\'t a jarring note for me at all.

I have really enjoyed this. I hope you post an update soon. I am looking forward to hearing about the confrontation that is coming.

I only just finished chapter nine- but I must tell you now how incredibly exciting and fun this is with everyone (2 Malfoy\'s and a Snape!) vying for Hermione! Why not throw a Weasely or Potter intot he mayhem as well?! LOL Honestly, the mosr fun you are having with this, the better it gets! There are many frequent mispellings and errors scattered through out (like \"rr. r.\" and \"emberered\" for instance) that you or a beta going through again would clear up. I\'m more of an SS/HG fan, but this story is sooooo great!

Well it does seem that she switched awfully fast... considering that she has had a crush on Severus since his 1st year speech. And personally I would be a bit more pissed off if I was duped into losingmy virginity to someone only pretending to be my man of choice. And more concerned for Severus as well... A confirmed Death Eater within Hogwarts and endangering everyone there would have had me running to the Headmaster asap, seduction and expulsion be damned! Not that I don\'t like the story, mind you, I find it quite entertaining in fact! Even if she does seem a bit impulsive and obsessive for a girl so logical... you\'re right, she is still very young! Oh and there are quite a few grammeratical errors so far- a beta would work wonders (I know- I have 2!)

wow! I really like this story. I adore Hermione/lucius and there simply aren\'t enough good ones out there...but yeah...preaching to the choir here, aren\'t I? anyway...I can\'t help but feel a little sorry for poor ol\' Sev. I mean he has done his best to be an honourable man and what has he got to show for it? I guess we can\'t blame him for his little vendetta, but I do hope he snaps out of it soon.... I hate the thought of Snape gone bad.

All there\'s left to say now is: keep up the good work! I am looking forward to an update soon :-)

I have to say, you have take up most of my weekend because I discovered your stories!!!!

I never read HP smut before, but I particularly like your stories, and I am also a huge Jason Issacs fan.

I\"ve become of a fan of Lucius anything!!!

I hope to get to read more!!!

Thank you so much for making me not do anything but read for the entire weekend.

I loved Lucius\'s Bookshelves by the way.

I can\'t wait for more smut in the future chapters of this one.

Severus\' behaviour was interesting, as the Order members were questioning his loyalty I was doing the same thing. Draco being the one to go after him makes sense since he knows some of what Severus is feeling in regards to Hermione.

Hermione and the way she took control over the situation and the way that she was blunt with the Order was amusing. I thought that Arthur and Molly\'s different reactions were realistic since I see him as more forgiving and accepting that her.