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by Lizski

person SandraM
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!! And they think I\'M an aggravating writer. I\'m patiently reading this while waiting for the other one. Very good, but it will be fun to see what\'s stuck up Lucius\' arse.

Amethyst Angel
person Anna
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. You know we love the Lucius smut just as much as you do. *Grins* I\'m sorry to hear about Lucius\' Bookshelves. I really like that story, but I know how it goes. Maybe some time away from it will help. Can\'t wait to read more of this story though. Keep up the great work and update soon!!
person GrrArrg
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
What a brilliant and original start to a new story.
I can\'t wait for more of this and \'Lucius\'s bookshelves\'
Kisses
GrrArrg
person Persephone
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the update, so very glad you\'re back!
person LilyMalfoy
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you updated. I\'ve been waiting for ages! Great chapter by the way.
person Luran
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This really looks like it\'s gonna be one of my fave stories - Lucius is just so damnable sexy!

My only problem with the story so far is that I don\'t think Lucius would be able to really discuss that project with Hermione - he is not a potions expert, after all, and I doubt he would have that much insight to discuss it with her. On the other hand, she was quite preoccupied while talking to him about it, so she might just have not noticed anything odd ...

Being really interested in the whereabouts of Severus and eagerly waiting for further chapters, I hope to get more soon!
person HPfreak18
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, I love it I a I am looking forward to more hopefully soon!!
person LilyMalfoy
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think it\'s too quick. Especially considering she lost her virginity to him. The story seems to be going well and I look forward to the next chapter.
person SilentSoul
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
update quickly!!! anticipating greatly for the next chapter
person Gabriele
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mhhhhh. As much as I like your Lucius (in particular the bookshelves Lucius) - is this one not too good, too romantic, too soft? I do not need a sadistic phsychopath but a little bit evil is not so bad (for example I love the wine-cellar scene in Lucius bookshelves and the part in the dungeons where Hermione is a little insecure and begs silently that he does not find again his former Muggle hate).
However, a good story. But as I love Severus very much, the comparison she makes between the two men is hard to read for me!!