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by Lizski

person Rilla
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What fantastic twists! I didn\'t see the one with Draco coming at all. You did a great job building the tension as Hermione described the whole deal to Snape. How embarrassing that must have been! I just adore all the characters you\'ve developed here (except Lucius at the moment, but I have a feeling you\'re going to make me like him by the end...at least a little!).
person Michelline
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well well well... The Draco thing has become VERY interesting. Is he telling the truth? Part of the truth? And I\'m glad to see (in your review responses) that Luscious Lucius will be losing the jerk thing. Sounds like he has some things on his mind... Anyway, I\'m looking forward to more. Hugs for you saying that Bookshelves isn\'t gone. Grin. Do you take bribes?? ;)
person GeekGoddess
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
gosh...I am such a fan of Hermione and either Snape or Lucius, but Draco is looking pretty good right now.....wow....that was an amazing chapter.
person Sher
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good twist! I have to admit that I definitely didn\'t Draco\'s proposal to Herm coming, but it adds complexity to an already volatile situation. Well done! I can\'t wait to see where you take thespeespecially since His Hotness is apparently going to get what\'s coming to him as well.

I\'ll be watching for updates
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**off to re-read Lucius\' Bookshelves**

Cheers!
Sher

person shel
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!!!
person Laerai
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this new twist that you added. I thought maybe that she was talking to Lucius instead of Severus, but the confrontation was just as good. I like the psal sal Draco made. I wonder what her choice will be? I\'ll be looking for the update! Fantastic Job!

Laerai
person SilentSoul
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NONONONO even though cliffhangers give a rather pleasurable anticipation, I HATE IT I HATE IT I HATE IT!!!!!

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person allana
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i loved it it was soo interesting to see lucius\' reaction i hope he comes around soon and lets hermione know how he really feels be it good or bad please update soon
person Peeves
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Liz ~

You are one evil little person. What do you mean leaving a cliffie like that! lol I will have you know I am am now pregnent...the hormones are beginning to kick in and the constant irritability is looming upon the horizon...it is at your own risk that you leave further cliffies. LOL Just kidding hun, I love this fic as much as Lucius\' Bookshelves. It is SO refreshing have someone write a HG/older man and have it NOT be Severus/Remus/or Sirius. hehe. Keep writing and I\'ll keep reading. :)

((raspberry))

Peeves
person SandraM
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the nasty little fork tongued serpent rears his (as usual) nasty head. Just knew there had to be SOME slime left.