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by Lizski

schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-5: This is a great story line do far. Terrific Lucius smut. Although that wasn't really Hermione on the couch with him, it was me using some Polyjuice Potion of my own. And yes, girls, Lucius is worth his weight in gold Galleons in the sack. 8-) (I wish...)

So, I'm trying to figure who's bad and who's good amongst the so-called Death Eaters.

Poor Severus - does he know what he's missed? I wonder what the real Snape used that couch for? Well, it's certainly been christened twice for him now. I don't think Hermione would have had a chance with Snape - he never made a move on her in all the time they worked on her project so she's better off with Lucius anyway. Unless she could manage a threesome. Nah, don't want to get greedy. So, back to reading and thanks for the great writing so far.
person wicraven
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
person skye
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ever so slightly disapointed that the story was actually only 25 chapters and not 50 'cause of the repost, but I agree with bella and everyone else ....UPDATE PLEASE?????!!!!!???? I'm stuck in a normally really snowy city with great hills, and currently have puddles and grass everywhere ( my tulips are coming up) So I'm drowning my ski-sorrows with AFF ( working pretty good so far OMG.....Herm's teaches Lucius to ....SKI!!!!!) anyhoo, fab story, hope it continues and please let Severus get a girl...sometime.. Skye
person Bella Snape
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one awesome story. I've just read through the first 25 chapters. Please let there be 25 more. I love this story.
person Claudia
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A really wonderful story. The OC Lucius is sweet and there were so many funny and touching details. Oh, and I love the way Draco does in this story. I hope he really gets a good reward.. and I would suggest Ginny for that *gg*
person dylan666
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should update! I've found this story very interesting, and I think that it would be a pity to not go on with your work. From my point of view this new side of Lucius is wonderful, and the whole story is well diveloped. I hope you will write more chapters.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person zairaphel
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My Gods, it's absolutely wonderful thus far! I love how the story is progressing and I am very curious as to just where Severus's loyalties lie. I am eagerly awaiting the exciting conclusion!
person pinkwands
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was 51 chapters and I was so excited hehe but its the same story twice it seems, no matter, it is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I adore it! I am hooked and salivating at the prospect of an update you are a very talented writer :)