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by Lizski

person deedee
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that it was hard for me to get into this story at first. I was use to Lucius\' Bookshelvefterfter a few chapters, I stopped reading this story. But I decided to give it another try and read chapter (9?) Well it\'s the one that Severus confronts Lucius about Hermione\'s problem. After that chapter, I was hooked. So I started reading all the chapters I missed.
I love watching men plot again one another for the love of a woman. But they don\'t seem to actually love her, do they? Lust, yes. But love?
I might have missed it somewhere, but did Draco hint that he wanted Hermione evf shf she wasn\'t pregnant?
Update soon:)
person SilentSoul
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAHOO!!! When Severus says he is a\'skilled man\', does that make lucius wrong when he said sumthing like he\'s bad in bed? so that means he\'s wrong, and he is good in bed? :P:P:P

Sorry Draco hunny, Hermione is reserved for Sevvy\'s cock




-SilentSoul

P.S Update
person Michelline
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Welcome back! I dearly missed you :) This is a beautiful chapter. I ADORED Hermione\'s response to Lucius\' note. Giggle! Can\'t wait to see the Lucius/Hermione interaction and tod oud out how Lucius reacts when he realizes Snape isn\'t really helping him...
person htl
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a GREAT story! More please!
person mary
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the recent chapter! Especially liked Lucius\' reaction to Severus\' news. Poor Lucius. So how is he going to get hermione alone?
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know it\'s the mark of a good author when you can change the readers mind with each passing chapter. AT first I thought, Ahhhhh Draco! Then I was like SEVERUS, Oh yes! And then... Maybe Lucius... I mean, he is interested in her and everything... But then Draco has good points too. Of course *I* wouldn\'t mind jumping in the sack with Severus, just to see if THAT little offer was really any good... MmMmMmmm choices!

KE
person SandraM
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Hermione! That was a 3-point shot from center court. (Bllllllllll, Lucy)
person Tanya
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Hermione\'s choices: Draco... Severus... or Lucius! Mmmm! I don\'t know if I would be able to choose! I wonder just what Lucius has up his sleeve though!? Great chapter! Update soon!
Tanya~
person ScarletEmma
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I\'m a big fan of all your other stori\'es, but this is the first time I\'m reviewing. Draco is so adorable. I know he\'s not usually called that, but the way you characterize him is so sweet. I love the relationship Severus and Lucius have. They\'re two faced and extremely hiliarious. And your Severus is so sexy! Anyway I hope Lucius meets with Hermione soon, because conflict is always fun.
Scarlet Emma
person SilentSoul
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHAT ABOUT FUCKNIG SEVERUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WATS WRONG WID HERMIONE MAN I THOUGHT SHE LOOOVED HIM, LOOOOOOVED HIM!!!! KILL DRACO! KILL DRACO!!! TELL HIM TO GO FUCK OLD ALBIE!!!







sincerely,
-SilentSoul