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by Lizski

person deedee
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I want a foot massage now. Anyway, I believe Lucius is about ready to hand over Severus on a silver platter. At least that would get rid of the competition. By the way, I love Severus\' plan to \'woo\' Hermione. It\'s sneaky yet subtle. I know he wants her, but does he really want to raise Lucius\' child? I can imagine how odd it would look if Severus and Hermione got married and had a lot of children, one light colored head among a sea of dark haired brothers and sisters. I wonder what they would tell the child. Please update soon:)
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man, that must have been some foot rub! I have studied reflexology, but THAT has never happened to me before. Hermione must really be a horny girl. Or Severus is just that awesome with the foot rubs.
What exactly is Lucius waiting for? If he keeps dilly dallying, he is going to be out of lwithwith Hermione. (You snooze, you lose)
Keep writing please.
person Sherrafina
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn Girl!! Make my toes tingle next time!!! Dunno if I will be able tond pnd poor Sev being pushed to the side after that whole foot rub thing;) Keep it coming...........HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Dema
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow a three way race to help Hermione. This is a great story so far! I can\'t wait to see what Harry and Ron\'ll do when they find out.
person Estrilda
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lizski, Hope you had a great vacation. I think the relaxation was a positive influence on your muse - the new chapters are wonderful. Please update soon.
person giova
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
M.S. great one! Hope to see more of this soon!
person Savannah
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was reading chapter ten, and one thing came to mind.

Sounds like Kentucky!

This is a great story and I really hope you continue it for as long as you can.
person Lady Anne
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was skeptical... but OMG how you have developed this story! I was just so disappointed that there\'s not more! I don\'t suppose we could change this into a SS/HG? LOL It\'s always worth asking!
person Sher
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very nice! I don\'t know how Severus manages to fit several insults into one sentence, but he does it so well!! Perhaps Lucius serves as inspiration for him in that area, particularly in view of the fact that both of them (not to mention Draco) want to play horizontal hockey with Hermione to the point where they\'d probably hex each other into next month. So many Slytherins, so little time...

Gee, to have Hermione\'s problems... ;-). As always, I await the next chapter :D

Cheers!
Sher
person Persephone
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"The boy didn