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for The Senior Project

by Lizski

person Persephone
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
At last an update and you stop there, just as Lucius is getting started?!
You are almost making me like Draco for reasons other than who his father is.
I think perhaps you should amend the title to The Senior Project or Hermione\'s Enviable Predicament.
Have fun on the slopes but don\'t stop writing. Good Malfoy fic is so hard to find.
person Trix
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh God you can\'t stop there. That was just cruel!

Great chapter. Wow Hermione has her hands full doesn\'t she? Two Malfoys and a Snape, whats a girl to do?

Let us know soon please!
person star
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
shit! don\'t leave us hangin like that! this story is getting better!1
person LUMEN
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
i\'m a draco/hermione and marcus/katie shipper, and dear friend of mine has been nagging and persuading me to read lucius/hermione fics. or severus/hermione. finally, i told her i would read one, but she needed to seriously recommend me a very good fic. so, low and behold, she recommended your story and i\'m totally blown away with it:) i\'m most definitely now a lucius/hermione severus/hermione shipper!!!!! love the way you write the story, love the plot and most of all, i love they way you describe everything in such detailed manner.

wow, i never thought in my life, i wanted so much to be a character of a story...LOL!!! that hermione is one lucky gal.
the lucius you describe is sooooo sexy and severus sounds like a total hot shag, i love when guys take their sweet time to do their coug lig like the way severus is working wiermiermione!!!

well, now that i have finished reading this amazing story, i off to read lucius\' bookshelves which i most definitely know will be another amazing story;) by the way, you mention in your a/n: that the story is still pending, is it??? anyway, i\'m dying to read it a.s.a.p.

keep up with the excellent work!

hugs,

LUMEN
person Luna Riddle
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehe, how interesting, all it took was a footrub to turn her on lol and i wonder what lucuis will do after seeing that, and i\'m really curious about all the \"attacks\", where is that going and all
person ScarletEmma
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! That was great. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Lucius must be going insane after seeing that. Anyway good luck with sking, and I\'ll try and be patient and wait for the next chapter.
person nevillus
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i know that this is supposed to be a hermione and lucius fic but the last chapter sounded like heaven to me. hermione in the middle of the two would be wonderful but i have no idea how you would go about it. looking forward to reading the rest as you are able to post. have fun skiing!!!
person Tanya
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh sheesh! I don\'t even know where I want you to go with this! Throughout the entire story you\'ve managed to sway my opinions back and forth between Severus and Lucius, and even Draco for one chapter... Right now I am torn between Severus and Lucius, I mean, they\'re both bastards who wouldn\'t have given Hermione the time of day had certain things not surfaced (ie. Hermione being pregnant and her crush on Severus being revealed) but anywho! Great chapter! Update soon and have fun skiing!
Tanya~
person Sher
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy. Shit.

Wow! I really enjoyed that whole foot massage sequence between Herm and Severus, but for some reason, I suspected that Lucius was watc (or (or would find out about it) somehow, so imagine how I almost blew all my circuits when that turned out to be the case :-D! However, I now find myself disagreeing with a statement made in \'Pulp Fiction\' by Samuel L. Jackson\'s character, when he stated \"foot massages don\'t mean shit.\" Just a thought, but I think Hermione and several other ladies would take exception to that also.

I can\'t help but feel sorry for Lucius though...the poor guy probably has one nerve left in his body right now and Severus is on it, in a big way.

Happy skiing and happy writing!

Cheers!
Sher
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am currently rooting for Severus and Hermione. I would like to see him give her a more.. personal massage. But then again... A Lucius giddy for Hermione is pretty awesome too.

Btw - I\'m the Queen of Unresolved Sexual Tension, and just to kick it up a knotch or two... Wouldn\'t it be rather mind boggling for something to happen with Draco to make Hermione jealous? Like, Pansy asking him too many questions, or flirting with him too much - and Hermione gets all crazy (hormones) and attacks Draco in a kissy way to assert her \"claim\" on him to the other girl *griins* ONly she does that RIGHT afteveruverus does something to turn her on and she and Draco wind up almost shagging in the hall way. And Severus sees. And Lucius.

HAHAHAHA

I have WAY too much sex on the brain.

Good Skiing!
KE