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person LUMEN
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the more you put lucius in the picture, the more i\'m falling in love with him!!!! loved the ges of of the ring, i think that is the perfect proof that he is definitely serious about taking care of his baby and hermione....got to love the guy!!! felt quite sad that he ate dinner alone:( he really loves hermione...and wants a family in his life!!!
i think the way hermione handle the situation with draco was good but very sad!!! to tell you the truth, i really was hoping that hermione would fall for draco but now, i\'m totally supporting that lucius stays with her. i just hope that draco didn\'t feel so sad and alone:(
what got me kind of worried is what lucius is going to do to ged ofd of voldie??? i think he definitely needs to go and talk to dumbledore!!!
i can\'t believe that hermione told harry the whole truth and nothing but the truth.....WOW!!! i feel sorry for harry, this must of hit him really hard and i don\'t blame him for the way he feels, he is right... this guy supports the man who killed his parents!! and like it or not, thatsomesomething that can\'t be just forgotten just like that, i guess he will have to deal with it little by little until the truth is out.
thank you for another great chapter!!! keep them coming, like i said before, i\'m hooked;)
can hardly wait to read more angsty chapters.... love them!!!!

LUMEN
person Michelline
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Skiing??!! Skiing??!! woman, you have a serious obligation to your faithful readers. sniff. hmph. ah well. I guess I can understand the lure, even if I\'ve never in my life seen enough snow to go skiing. I\'m in Florida and the only skiing I\'m likely to try anytime soon is Water... :) Now about this latest chapter - I feel badly for Draco. He\'s having to deal with so many issues right now that it\'s getting easier and easier to like him. And my... Lucius... sigh. When you\'re through with him, feel free to toss him my way. And that business with Harry - when is the boy going to realize things aren\'t always about him? Can\'t wait to see the next chapter and how it all plays out. Esp. now that Hermione has a \"promise\" ring.

And of course, if you would like to serve up a new shelf of Lucius\' Bookshelves... ;) (so what if I\'m begging. I do it well!)
person Anna
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can\'t believe Harry. I would have thought that he would....well I didn\'t think he would act like that. I hope that Lucius doesn\'t turn his back on poor Hermione. I really hope that he finds a way to be with her without her being in danger. Poor Draco! Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to reading more. Please update soon!!
person mary
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it! So when\'s Lucius going to see Hermione again?
person Tanya
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, such a sad chapter, but I loved it! Have I mentioned that I love angst? lol, I think I have... anywho! I\'m really lik liking Harry right now... you\'d think that after all the times that people have judged him without giving him a chance to explain himself would show him that he should have at least heard her whole story.

And Draco... loved his reaction. I could picture it in my mind and I think that is exactly how he would have reacted. Now I\'m kinda worried about what Ron will say when he finds out... all the Weasleys in fact... Hermione needs to understand that most of them will agree wiarryarry on this. At least, that\'s how I see them reacting.

Also, Lucuis. The bastard. He better not hurt Herm and he better get get him in trouble *whether or not he turns on Voldie doesn\'t matter to me, as long as he keeps himself safe* so that he and Herm can have their \"happily ever after\" *cough* yeah right... lol...

Again, a wonderful chapter! Please update again *sooner is better than later* and have fun skiing!

Tanya~
person Sherrafina
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Harry is a dick!!! This update was WONDERFUL though:) You really got a lot of \"housekeeping\" doneookiooking forwa
person Sherrafina
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Harry is a dick!!! This update was WONDERFUL though:) You really got a lot of \"housekeeping\" done. Looking forwa
person librarygirl
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and Lucius! I really enjoy his attitude towards Snape, its too funny at times. Update soon :)

person deedee
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I think it\'s time for Hermione to get some new lingerie:) The red bra and panty set are getting old. This chapter was a bit fluffy, but it was still wonderful.
As I read this story, Draco seems to actually like Hermione and there seems to be a possibility of a strong relationship growing between the two of them (not just sex).
On the other hand, Lucius and Severus seem to lust after Hermione. What separates Lucius\'s want of Hermione from Severus\'s?
Please update soon:)
person Sher
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I get back from vacation and look what I find...two additional chapters to one of my favourite stories in fanfic. I\'m glad that my silent assumption about Lucius was correct. I figured he wouldn\'t be into sharing Hermione and judging from his musings about Severus, I was right (pretty please ;-D). I can\'t say any more about your incredibly multi-dimensional Lucius without running the risk of repeating myself, but I just love the guy! However, I\'m thinking you should revise your disclaimer to say the following:

\"I do not own Lucius. The only upside to tis tis that I don\'t have to keep explaining to people why I\'m collapsing from exhaustion.\"

Oh, and spot on about Lady Malfoy\'s \"Flame and Moonlight\". I just found that one a few days ago and am thoroughly enjoying it. I\'m not that far into it yet, but who would have thought an OC could be so much fun!

I look forward to more updates :D.

Cheers!
Sher