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by Lizski

person genna
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last posting of chapter 26 was in feb 2007, I read this in dec 2007 and this might be the last chapter to the story...so I will just say this for posterity's sake.

I know women in general like a good romantic tale. Lucius turns over a new leaf because he loves Hermione. The rest of the world be damned.

I find the early stirrings in Severus and Draco to be compelling. I even like the way Albus was drawn considering that most people write him as an old person whose emotional range is beyond an aged man.

I find myself intrigued that everyone would accept the new Lucius because he says he has changed, his estranged son stands behind him and a quirky spill her guts Granger decides to just tell all her business to the public Order. These spoiled Harry stories have really surprised me in the world of Severus and Lucius fic, but I am always astounded by the relationships fic writers bring to movie universes. If you had a chance to finish this story, I would have liked to see who would have been killed and who could have saved themselves.

Best wishes in all your future works,

Genna
person Syra
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I would just like to say how much I enjoyed this fiction. I just recently became a fan of Lucius/Hermione, as well as Snape/Hermione. Generally I had been sticking to Dramione, and Sirius and/or Remus. I came across my new love of Lucius quite by accident and I haven't regretted it since. This one is by far my favorite and I hope that one day you will decide to finish it. Well thanks, now I am off to read Lucius's Bookshelves. I will review that one also when I finish.
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I enjoy the detailed love scenes *WEG*=*Wicked Evil Grin*, and the interaction of the characters. Keep up the good work, and please UPDATE, UPDate, update! =D
person DB1
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@29. great story i hope you update soon

*DB*
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story, I started reading it a long time ago and lost the link the found it again! You're truly gifted with words.
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is such an interesting story. i love the complex characters. i can't wait to see what snape is going to do, and i have a feeling that it won't be such a good thing. is lucius really plotting something or are his feelings real? how is the final battle going to go down? i can't wait for the next chapters. pelase update soon.
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6-7: Oh dear, I suspected it before but now it's a certainty. The little Gryffindor temptress is preggers. What on earth is Lucius going to do with this snarl in his life? And Hermione is pretty well toast. Can't blame Hermione for gobbling up all that goodness, but gobbling wasn't what got her in this fix (snerk). Hasn't Mr. Do-It-To-Me Death Eater ever heard of a contraceptive charm?

The girl talk was really cute - and so accurate. I wonder what boys think girls talk about. I don't imagine they believe it's their packages and technique. So clueless. I'd figure they talked the same way about girls except when has a female ever garnered more interest than a football game? (Or soccer or baseball or any other sport, depending on which country one lives in...)

It's nice that Draco is not so nasty and I'm crossing my fingers that there's a hidden reason for Lucius to be acting as he is.

I'll be back for more chapters. I'm always so buried in my own that I get sidetracked. Your writing is wonderful and I'm enjoying both the plot and the prose very much. I've got a lot of chapters to go and each one is like opening a Christmas present. Thanks!
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh write more please, really love this :D
person DB1
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@29. Wow great story I love it. please update soon!!!

*DB*
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!

*jumps around.:.freaks out* YOUR BACK! YAY! YAY!

OMG! I have so been missing the hell out of this story! I thought you disappeared for good! I was bummed!

Heh!

But your back, which leaves me hoping that my love for Lucius/Hermione is not dying now that you are here to put out some good work!