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by Lizski

person JTBJAB
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s ok, I hate it when technology messes up!

Great chapter but a really cruel ending!!!!!

Jeez, I swear I was biting my nails before that last bit, and then Hermione announces that!!!! Oh man!!!

Please update soon!!!
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderfully done chapter. Even without beta services. I did notice one little thing -
person Koppe
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snicker* Oh, don\'t stop now!! I\'m guessing dead silence... followed by the shouting match to end all shouting matcher... :-D
Great story! I hope you\'ll continue it until they marry -- and perhaps with an epilouge about their child(ren) attending
Hogwarts. I also hope you\'ll let Lucious meet Hermione\'s parents. BTW, I\'ve haven\'t been able to help thinking of the
following dialouge (or something like it -- for when Hermione have to explaing things to Ron and/or Ginny:
\"But after we.. you know... *did* it, he (Snape)... _changed_. He became a completly different person... (long pause) *literarly*!
It turned out I\'d just shagged Lucious Malfoy using polyjuice-potion\"
Keep on the *great* work with this story!
-Koppe
person agnessa
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear-sweat-lovely-adorable LIZSKI-GODDESS!

I just want to express my undying devotion-love-adoration for this (and your other fics!) wonderful peace of fan-literature. I was sooo happy when I realized you continued it despite all the difficulties in RL. May everything turn out for the best in this fic and your life too.
person Michelle
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY SO, MUCH. I LOVE THE WAY BOTH MALFOY MEN TAKE CARE OF HERMIONE. I\'M HAPPY FOR THEM. UPDATE SOON
person mary
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really, really good! I liked the ending where Hermione told Molly that she was marrying Lucius. Can\'t wait to see Molly\'s reaction! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person garillama
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve only just started, but let me say that I\'m enjoying this IMMENSELY! Unfortunately, many of the stories on this site leave much to be desired, and I was expecting to give up on reading this story after the first chapter because of near-physical pain ;) Thank you so much for surprising me! This story looks great so far!

(One concrit: I can\'t imagine either Lucius or Severus actually grinning. . .smirking, maybe, but grinning, no)

I\'m looking forward to reading the rest!
person Phoenixangel7
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter, can hardly wait for the reaction to Hermione\'s news! Kick yo\' hubby off that computer and tell him the audience is waiting to hear about Hermione and Lucius, not ski racing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Renee Thompson
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear, I think my jaw dropped a good four inches!! This is honestly one of the BEST fanfics I have ever read! You write very well, and it is so good I don\'t even mind spelling errors (which is saying something becasue spelling is my petpeeve)! It is a great plot, excellent character deveolpment, and o buddy is it HAWT!!! keep up the good work! I love it!