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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ah, ma cherie, l\'histoire de mlle. leblace est bien amusante.
dang, you spelled my name right, you inject arthur, smut and french at all the right spots ... i think i\'m in love. would you marry me? oh wait, i\'m married. and a girl. doh! er, not that there\'s anything wrong with that, you understand.
can\'t wait to see what grand-mere slipped into kathryn\'s pocket -- hopefully, it will be something to shut narcissa up and keep our couple happy!
dang, you spelled my name right, you inject arthur, smut and french at all the right spots ... i think i\'m in love. would you marry me? oh wait, i\'m married. and a girl. doh! er, not that there\'s anything wrong with that, you understand.
can\'t wait to see what grand-mere slipped into kathryn\'s pocket -- hopefully, it will be something to shut narcissa up and keep our couple happy!
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I`m really overhelmed by your story and truly engrossed during the reading time-hoestly-I appreciate not only the parts including my favourite Severus,what`s obvious,beeing me a great,devoted Snapefan,yet the chapters with another characters as well,because of your amazingly adorable ability to create very interesting plots,to involve original ideas,that is difficult-to avoid cliches in fictions,but you have very impressing invented new situations,I read every chapter with pleasure,genuily interested in facts and speculations what would be in the future.I welcome new original characters(Kathryn`s family-for instance)as well as all canon persons-Harry,Hermiona et ceat,obviously I`m glad when I read about Severus-he is main reason I`ve ever read fics.I like well-written lemons,especially if they`re improving good plots-like in your work.I assure you-I`m waiting for new installment and anxiuosly read all of them.
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! So, who is Harry\'s true love going to be? Male (Draco) or female (Minuet)? Severus and Kathryn are great together. Please another chapter or 2 in New Orleans... Kathryn\'s family is facinating.
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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm....
I feel all warm and cozy in my belly. Thank you.
I feel all warm and cozy in my belly. Thank you.
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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow -- arthur. amazingly tied in. this keeps getting better and better and i can\'t wait to read more!
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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. I read the whole story in one sitting.Keep it up! I really liked the part about King Arthur. And the fairie too, of course. This is the only story I have reviewed on Adultfanficton. You just inspired me so much! Thank you, Melissa
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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy and like your story very much and am waiting for every next chapter,your invention in creation of plots and character is really great,especially your OFC appears to be strong,lovely and admirable,the storyline,new ideas,been involved are equally interesting,making me impatient and curious what would be in the future.Many th for for this fic and quickly made updates that I highly appreciate,with hope you`ll be able to lead this work to the very end.I truly like OFC/SS fics.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. complex, interesting, and i love your heroine\'s name (gee, guess what *my* name is...). i\'ll be interested to read how the balancing act between slytherin and gryffindor continue. not to mention, looking for a few lemony moments in the kathryn/severus storyline. hint, hint...
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
<> i got a mention! last time i was this excited, i was jumping up and down, yelling, \"the new phone books are here!\"
again, very intriguing -- plot and writing, both. and major props to anyone who can work in dialogue from a (governor) arnold flick! can\'t wait to see the action unfold.
again, very intriguing -- plot and writing, both. and major props to anyone who can work in dialogue from a (governor) arnold flick! can\'t wait to see the action unfold.
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice story so far. Its intelligently written and easy to read. You should definately write more stories your quite good at it.