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Hey,my favourite author,what I`ve just read?!You,weak woman,had submitted to our beloved bastard-extraordinare,Master of Snarkiness and Sneer?!I understand it very well,he is irresistible and overhelming,isn`t he?I had been defeated long ago and obeyed silently,joining to the Severus` Muggle harem so now you have me here -an anxious and slightly insane Snapefics` reader,addicted to the stories and him,despite his attitude and moods.But yet you should him frighten a little(for instance-next story would be his romance with such a horrible woman he`s never dreamed in nightmares)to make him more obendiant to you,his mistress because of beeing the bloody author or you`ll erase him at all*evil grin*I sometimes have wicked desire to confront and argue with Severus,annoy him and take over the edge of his temper.
Nice to know you are a true artist,able not only to write with great talent*sighs of envy* but illustrate your story as well*again pure envy because of my hopeless love to drewing art,much more thatry try it myself*

I always enjoy your chapters. What\'s next? Please let there be a happy ending. It would just break my heart if Kathryn and Severus couldn\'t be together.

You know-the world around me doesn`t exist while I`m reading your story,especially the lemony chapter that I finished a while ago.These dark chapters with Voldemort`s summoning and encounter with dreadful Bellatrix-they were truly exhausting,painful and breathtaking.I try to imagine which way you`re going to lead sto storyline,yet I`m really uneasy,your invention is so upredictable(save the romance between main characters,but this thing would`ve been unforgiven if you hadn`t allowed them to be lovers)so I could only wait for new installment with impatience and curiosity.Many good dreams for you and no nightmares!

my, you do know how to flatter a girl, don\'t you? \"(I) catch all (your) errors\"? I blushed until I read this chapter. then i cried. let\'s just say that the idea of minuet (sorry, my french education requires that i refer to her as minuette. notistaistake, it\'s a francophile\'s problem) had rongrong, loving man stand with her as her father while she chose her signficant gift... wow.

and i LOVE the comparison and similarity of minerva and grand-mere, the only two maternal figures in severus\' life. i know you won\'t leave me blowing my nose into my blouse after all this; grand-mere would hex you past eternity! still, i have to wonder at how kathryn and severus will solve all the problems surrounding them so that they can be together...

Whatever you may say about the difficulty of writing Chaps 36 &37, they were well donDon\Don\'t try for more than you feel comfortable with, but don\'t get too involved with what\'s happening, either. I thought you did a fine job of making that almost-rape scene believable.
And, even though I haven\'t reviewed often, I\'m really enjoying the story. It\'s really engaging. I look forward to my evenings when I can catch up on the newest postings.

I could do many things but shoot you by very selfish reason,indeed-would have never finished one of the most favourite fics if I`d done it.;)) Honestly,I enjoy the Muggle interlude as much as the other parts of the story,I anxiously read every chapter and heartfully assure you-this work is worth reading,surely have never been disappointed or waisting time,you are very inventive writer,my greatest hope is you won`t suffer the bloody writer`s block that devastates effects of many such brilliant fics that are still unfinished.

i stand (sit) correctegaregarding the portrait and thank you for your gently worded explanation.

these hadbe tbe two tough chapters to write, to let severus work through so much. as usual, you wrote clearly, sensitively and with a deft way of conveying the emotion. my only complaint is that one four letter word: doom. noooooo! say it won\'t be so. i look forward with great anticipation (and no small amount of trepidation) to the coming chapters. in the meantime, i\'ll try not to threaten a temper tantrum if i don\'t get my happily ever after. i mean, come one. at least one kathryn in the world should end up with a man who can perform four times in less than 8 hours!!

masterful as always, my friend. just a few specific comments -- because i can\'t resist

thank you for being the one to FINALLY bring in some decent hootch to hogwarts! i don\'t care how magical old ogden\'s is, it can\'t taste better than gledfidditch!

in chap. 31, severus, par and and kathryn (see -- i got the right woman this time. i\'m taking better notes) pass \"the pink lady\" to get to the gryffindor common room; isn\'t the portrait of the fat lady? although, most of us portlier white women (self included) are indeed pink....

and severus in armani. oh. oh my. oh my, yes! if only we stilled lived in torrance i\'d head up to listen to your recommended bands! and tell me, \'cause i can never remember, are the a & r folks death eaters or members of the ootp?

love this -- hate you for having so much talent. sigh...

So I`ve been praying for the most fruitful dreams of all,obviously for my personal indulgance in your incredibly marvellous story,sheer pleasure to know such lentlented writer and bask in joy of reading.Internet Snapefics are my truly hobby,I read and have still read many of them,might be hundreds,yet the good one isn`t so often thing I would wish to be,so when I had found your story was immensly happy,much more thet you are so creative and quick in writing,very adorable fact for me.

looking forward to seeing how (not if) severus and the boy-who-lived-to-be-a-thorn-in-his-side come to a mat mature relationship. and speaking of mature relationships .... i love the affectionate interplay between hermione and severus. hope there\'s lemon on the dessert menu soon!