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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve decided that it\'s the descriptions. so detailed, so precise, but never too much. of course, I\'ll probably decide that it\'s the dialogue in the next chapter. or the pacing.
in any event, it\'s clear that you know what you\'re doing with this writing thing. Just keep reminding me that you\'re the professional; I shouldn\'t try this at home!
in any event, it\'s clear that you know what you\'re doing with this writing thing. Just keep reminding me that you\'re the professional; I shouldn\'t try this at home!
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November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"a bathtub full of warm naked woman\" -- GREAT line!
As always, a chapter full of surprises that make wonderful sense in the context of the characters and your story line. Now if you could do something about all those stupid semi-colons...
As always, a chapter full of surprises that make wonderful sense in the context of the characters and your story line. Now if you could do something about all those stupid semi-colons...
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Severus and Harry may never make it to friendship in your story, but I love seeing their relationship evolve into a respectful allegiance. and the vision of Neville nearly shouting \"Hosanna\" as Kathryn walks in the room -- priceless!
and what I wouldn\'t give to be asked into the storeroom with Snape (sorry - sudden surge of estrogen)....
can\'t wait for the next chapter!
and what I wouldn\'t give to be asked into the storeroom with Snape (sorry - sudden surge of estrogen)....
can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The chapter with Narcissa`s tea was a masterpiece of work,I have to admit.The risky play with Voldie and the amazing conversation with Narcissa, dangerous and full of subtlety as well were both enjoyable and admirable,I read with true pleasure and I`m very anxiously waiting for continuation.You are so inventive and unpredictable,those features,while are present in the writer`s work-are the most valuable and desirable at all.Wishing you to be in good mood and healthy regards L.A.
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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so I lied and I\'m reviewing....again.
Glad to see Kathryn handle the curve ball of moldy Voldy\'s Occlumency. As muggles (grin), I think we forget how complex the wizarding world might be, even when one is simply taking tea with a hated rival.
I\'m off to practice flouncing whilst seated ~ air kisses!
Glad to see Kathryn handle the curve ball of moldy Voldy\'s Occlumency. As muggles (grin), I think we forget how complex the wizarding world might be, even when one is simply taking tea with a hated rival.
I\'m off to practice flouncing whilst seated ~ air kisses!
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November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, a tough chapter, especially after the last few that have been so warm and tender.
your descriptions are so vivid; you really brought the warehouse and the prison to life.
your descriptions are so vivid; you really brought the warehouse and the prison to life.
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November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh a nice dark chapter to feed my angsty soul. Very good. Interesting death eater codes of honor. Intersting that he asked Snape to take care of his family is there somethingmore there? Nice imagry with the snake.
Good suspense, as I thought the traitor was going to be our PM, not Mins father. Interesting to go to Azkaban.
Thanks for posting so often.
Good suspense, as I thought the traitor was going to be our PM, not Mins father. Interesting to go to Azkaban.
Thanks for posting so often.
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November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE the opening volley. it was everything i hoped for...even after reading it the fourth time.
i can\'t wait to hear how exactly moldywort\'s folly (vis a vis marie) is exposed, but I do have to say this --
i have read a LOT of fanfics over the past several weeks. yours is one of (maybe) three i would actually PUBLISH, much less recommend. thank you for paying attention to motives. thank you for including back stories. thank you for not concentrating solely on smut. thank you for including smut, when it\'s appropriate.
God bless you for having talent. God bless you for adding discipline to that talent and writing a story that I really and truly WANT to read.
get the picture? thank you for writing!!!
i can\'t wait to hear how exactly moldywort\'s folly (vis a vis marie) is exposed, but I do have to say this --
i have read a LOT of fanfics over the past several weeks. yours is one of (maybe) three i would actually PUBLISH, much less recommend. thank you for paying attention to motives. thank you for including back stories. thank you for not concentrating solely on smut. thank you for including smut, when it\'s appropriate.
God bless you for having talent. God bless you for adding discipline to that talent and writing a story that I really and truly WANT to read.
get the picture? thank you for writing!!!
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the emotions around the christmas presents brought me to tears. the affection and reflection were beautifully conveyed. if only all christmas celebrations were as touching and if only all fanfics were as senstively written.
it\'s a joy to read your work!
it\'s a joy to read your work!
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are really awsome. You have a great knowledge of the mystical that many do not have. I am about 10 chapters away from your most recent chapter and it just gets better and better. It is like a cross of my favorite books; Harry Potter, Gone With The Wind, Lord of the Rings, Interview w/Vampire(New Orleans), and Mists of Avalon. I hope you do not mind my asking, but are you of Pagan faith?ouldould love to see your illistrations if you\'ll send them.