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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your A/N gladdened my heart; not because you mentioned me, but because you\'re going to post a lot! Yay!
I appologize if I haven\'t reviewed often, there\'s not much to say that hasn\'t been said before. It\'s a wonderful story and I look forward to reading every update.
On a side note, there was a small mistake in chapter 62. In the fight scene there was snow. May.May. ummmmmm. :P
ta\' dahling!
I appologize if I haven\'t reviewed often, there\'s not much to say that hasn\'t been said before. It\'s a wonderful story and I look forward to reading every update.
On a side note, there was a small mistake in chapter 62. In the fight scene there was snow. May.May. ummmmmm. :P
ta\' dahling!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I see the Severus`torment is endless,I hate this \"eugenic\"idea and his role in it,he and his helpless victim,sometimes pathetic yet still childish girl from his own House-this part of story is really hard to read,if somebody,like me,feels compassionately with the heroes of your wonderful fic.
BTW you couldn`t make me happier than promising the sequel,and don`t daresay that this wonderful piece of work is\"monstrous\"even if you are the author!LOL It`s much more than obvious I`m going to stay with the new story to the very end,checking impatiently if you made update.As I wrote a while ago-I`m really the devoted reader of your writing masterpieces.
Now I`m dying of curiosity what end would be in this part,not able to anticipate.
BTW you couldn`t make me happier than promising the sequel,and don`t daresay that this wonderful piece of work is\"monstrous\"even if you are the author!LOL It`s much more than obvious I`m going to stay with the new story to the very end,checking impatiently if you made update.As I wrote a while ago-I`m really the devoted reader of your writing masterpieces.
Now I`m dying of curiosity what end would be in this part,not able to anticipate.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Not what I expected which is, ourseurse, just what you planned. This chapter leaves me cold and aching, but again, that\'s just how you meant it. Your dialogue and descriptions continue to pull me right inhe she story, even if it\'s against my will sometimes.
As much as I look forward to new chapters, I dread the inevitable end of a favorite story. Please -- keep writing, keep posting, keep us notified!
As much as I look forward to new chapters, I dread the inevitable end of a favorite story. Please -- keep writing, keep posting, keep us notified!
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG-
The Pansy situation is about as dark as you can get.
This is a good chapter, I am seeing the pacing start to pick up again.
A sequel to sub rosa?? Do you have a title yet?
The Pansy situation is about as dark as you can get.
This is a good chapter, I am seeing the pacing start to pick up again.
A sequel to sub rosa?? Do you have a title yet?
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The few last chapters are so different in their mood,from the light scene with lady dragon-it was amusing,indeed,to the last chapter-that appears very dark,left me frozen with the awful images of new Voldemort`s conception,I fully understand the chill in Severus`heart when he heard new plans.His future pthoothood,his hope for normal life with Kthryn-I`m so impatiently curious which way you`re going to play those plots and what end would be suitable for this doubtlessly wonderful story, obviously it isn`t the proposition you should finish the story,oh,no!not yet.I`m waiting as usual for update,trying guess new events but you are so marvellously impredictable,I love this aspect of your writing-that so often I`m not able to foresee your invention.
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are so awsome to give us so many new chapters. Now that I have caught up with this story I have to wait with baited breath for each new instalment.lol
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a nice treat to arrive at my T-Day destination to find several new chapters to read!
Who, pray tell, is going to be kidnapped fromthe USA to breed? Lilith? Hmm.
Who, pray tell, is going to be kidnapped fromthe USA to breed? Lilith? Hmm.
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can just see Severus hyperventilating, not unlike anyone who\'s actually gotten pregnant!
This is setting up to be an intense pair of issues -- the pureblood issue and Severus\' child. As always, your descriptions and dialogue convey so much and are creative and accurate. Lovely...
This is setting up to be an intense pair of issues -- the pureblood issue and Severus\' child. As always, your descriptions and dialogue convey so much and are creative and accurate. Lovely...
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story so far. Although I must admit that it is rather an odd feeling seeing one\'s last name used in a story even it is used as a first name for a child. Are you pronouncing it \"lil\", the french way or \"laisle\" the english way. Our family has usually pronounced it the latter, but you would be surprised by the many different variations of the name I have heard.
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay- 3 posts for me.
I love your imagination! Can\'t wait for the angsty parts.
I love your imagination! Can\'t wait for the angsty parts.