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I\'ve only made it through chapter 3 so far, I must say, I\'m enjoying this. I absolutely love your prose, wish I could write as well as you do. This story flows so well, I find myself taking mental notes while I\'m reading. I like your style, third person writing with a first person feel. That is hard to accomplish, I don\'t read to many stories that feel that way, they are few and far between. Your character developement if very good, well rounded I must say. I find most fanfiction to be somewhat flat at times, personally, I love characters with flaws, it only makes them more real. Like life. Thanks for posting this story. I\'ll keep reading.

Ends left me with very mingled feelings-the pleasure of watching of way the story has been growing,developing and claryfing in the end joined with sadness of the thing that won`t continue,that`s nothing to wait,nothing to achieve after time of impatience and curiosity.You know-I want all authors to finish their works and my admiration is even higher than before,if it were possible,I`m happy seeing the epilogue,however somewhere,deep in heart I`m a little sad so the promise of the next part is brightest news of the day,I must only be patient and wait,silly of me,indeed,`cause it seems I`ve become to be addicted to your story and wonderful characters,both Kathryn and Minuet have had a very warm place in my heart,despite I like above all watch my beloved Severus in all fics,this time I want (and,honestly,badly)to read about another people you had included in.
Thank you for this great adventure that was your story,don`t forget I appreciate your drawing works as well and welcome it veryh evh every time you want to present.I used to print every chapter and now I`m able to reread it even I have no access to the computer,especially during my long duties,when I can a little rest,come very often back to your story,finding things I`d missed before.
With love and hope you`ll still want to create the next fic
regards
Lady Aidil

Nice ending with a promise of an interesting sequel. I WILL BE LOOKING FOR IT.

I will wait to read the continuing adventures of Severus and Kat- the two most adult thinking characters on fanfiction.

I like the fact this is not a james bondy spy type story.

The one thing I really liked about this story is Kats POV and Severus POV as being very world weary adults, and the kids are essentially kids.

You need to let us know if you ever publish an original story.

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! It can\'t be over!
Seriously, I loved this story - well, epic. You\'ve done a wonderful job keeping Severus in character and I like Kathryn very much. The American/British psyche has been interesting to follow. Especially at the present time in the muggle world...
Thank you for your brilliance. Makes my day job easier to handle when I\'ve got such a delightful world in which to escape!

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moooooooooooooooore! none of this, writing for a living crap! We want you all to ourselves! (And we want Kathryn and Severus to be happy forever after. and we want Harry to master the sword and kill Moldywort. and, and, and...)

Do write as soon as you have a chance!

Friendlyquark, Thank you very much for your story. I will await your sequel in mid-December. I love your work!
God bless.

just wanted to say-i love your story. i

What a t-day treat to get two chapters. Boy o boy was I concerned that you\'d have killed off K.

Typical in character Potter, well done.

Poor Severus, having to do all those nasty things.

.....sigh......

yes, I know there will be a sequel

yes, I know you have a real life that requires at least some passing attention from you

yes, I know you write quickly

still, I\'m not looking forward to spending the next few days, weeks or --heaven forfend! -- months without a chapter or three from you, updating the adventures and love of my favorite OFC and her Potions Master.

Thank for for the ride through Sub Rosa!

I am so thrilled you got a paying job!

Great story, I didn\'t want it to end. Such a spy ending, leaving at the train station.

Looking forward to the epilog/sequel. I will watching for your stories.