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for Bubble bath

by Shiv5468

person spaz141
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks
person nesscafe
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv, have I told you lately how much I love your stories? Cause I really do! I was wondering if you were ever going to get this one updated! I think this last chapter was something really special! I laughed and I giggled. I especially loved Hermione telling him to tell her that her hair looks good if if it\'s horrible! That was classic! He should be on his knees thanking her. Most women aren\'t so kind. Anyways, I thought over all Snape had a right to toot his own horn. He did have a full well accomplished day! Update sooner this time!
person sinj
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! another chapter. Looking forward to the next, can\'t wait to see how bad a day Draco can have. Update soon!
person AlphaRyoko
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sure that in some of my reviews for your other stories I\'ve indicated that I LOVE YOU SHIV!!! ... so here\'s a belated Valentine of a review:

... I liked how you managed to make Hermione the uber-brain (as always), yet she wasn\'t domineering or bitchy.
... I liked how you kept Severus somewhat canon (i.e., he\'s not a fool) yet believable in this situation.
... I liked how you characterized Ron as quick to catch on with an easygoing manner (very canon), rather than the evil idiot as in most HG/SS fics.
... I liked how you made Harry the idiot (also very canon, imho) ...

You have such a deft touch with the dialogue! Very snappy and full of dry humor ... just like in all the great romantic comedies of the \'40s and \'50s. I always picture your Hermione and Severus in one of those B/W films, ala Hepburn and Tracy, wisecracking at each other while dripping with sexual tension.

All in all, enjoyed this very much! Keep up the good work & hope that you\'re feeling better soon.
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All hail the awesomeness (is that a word?) of Shiv. What is it 5 stories you are writing simultaneously? However do you do it?
It was cute that Severus and Hermione had worn each other out with their sexual exploits and needed sleep. Not a sex god, doubtful. At least how I picture Severus.
Post something soon. I really don\'t care what fic it is. Arithmancy Dating Service would be nice.
Cheers dear!
person yncarn8
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always honey. Sev the stud obviously needs his beauty sleep doesn\'t he? Are we going to get some early morning action? I do hope so.
person Jenny
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve missed this story. I\'m thrilled to know it\'s finished and champing at the bit to read the rest.

I\'ve just re-read the lot to remind me of it - and chuckled consistently throughout. I\'d forgotten how great it was. Your Ron is *superb*. Well, all of them are excellent, but the Ron is just *wonderful*.

More! More!

And other such noises.
person ancientgirl
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe I haven\'t seen this one before. Great story. I have to say Draco did them a favor but I can see why they are bothet. et. I can\'t wait to read about Draco\'s day of telling the truth.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapte.. I.. I am so glad that you have updated this story!!! I can\'t wait to see how Draco responds to his payback!!!

I like the way that you had Hermione & Severus discuss honesty, very well done!!!

Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<
person e
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
shiv... in a sudden moment of need for an update of anything youve written, i simply started a new one i hadnt read yet.

i now wait impatiently for all your muses to fly in and for you to grow six more hands, so you can write dd2, it started a b a book, ada, and this one. all at the same time.

ok. you dont have to do them all at the same time. and i couldnt even pick a favorite to say please update... anyway. but update something! anything! i just want some shiv writing, as it is some of my favorite writing here in fic-land!

xoxo
...me...