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for Bubble bath

by Shiv5468

person Daya
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Rarely do I find myself speechless, but perhaps you caught me on a day when my brain is refusing to work. All I can is Dis DON\'T STOP THERE! More, please.... oh god.... I know have images of Severus in a dark green bathrobe. I think I need a lie down. Or a cold shower... or a nice hot, wet, ........NO! Sorry, my mind is running away from me, and has ended up in a dungeon, a bubble bath, and with Snape. I don\'t even like baths! I\'m a shower girl!

Sorry...please... sod the life in the real world... I need more on this.

Daya. Now seriously debating a bath...
person Rilla
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Of course the ironing can wait! (it\'s sad to say that my kids probably wouldn\'t even know what an iron was) This is just delicious! I can\'t wait for more...and for Dirty Deeds...and all the rest as well!
person deblovesdragon
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What\'s up with McGonagall? She basically comes out and tells Hermione to seduce Severus. That seems a little off.
Your characteration of Hermione is right on! I can\'t wait to see what you do with Snape! I think that Snape will dither a
bit at the tub and Hermione will have to turn up the heat.
Keep writing.
person Jenny
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*giggles*

I think he\'s going to have a *heart*-attack! My dear Shiv, if he\'s able to come up with any remotely coherent reaction, well, you\'ll have to write it damn cleverly for me to believe it!!

You evil, evil woman! I look forward very, very much to seeing how he reacts to this - very much indeed! I don\'t care if you have a social life, I want more story!! Stories, in fact - *all* your stories!! But you know that already.

Incidentally, I love your MinerBrilBrilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Slightly more \"Jean Brodie\" Maggie Smith than Minerva\'s usually portrayed as - but viable, none-the-less. (That\'s the worldliness of Jean Brodie, rather than all her other, horrible characteristics, of course!!)

OK, now, I\'m going before I wear out my exclamation mark key.
person angel
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more please soon...........who else wants to swap places with Hermione? me! me! I do!

Ironing is evit iit is the work of the devil, there is no need to iron, fold carefully!

angel
person amethyst
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know if he will or not, but I hope he does!
person jeanett
schedule January 17, 0000 at 12:00 AM
well done Shiv, Neville gets a happy. :)

Jeanette