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for Bubble bath

by Shiv5468

person magegirl
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please write more. please please please? I really really like it. Oh, I have 1 tihy bit of critism. Its also a question. Why was hermine invited to spend time in snapes room to \"do homework\" and \"read\" in the first place. and how?? thank you fr writing this story, please write more.
person Sare Liz
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well of course he\'s going to say yes.

Er, right?

Sare, answering much after the fashion of an uncertain potions student
person Fish
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! BATHTIME WITH SEVVIE!

awwwww!!!

more soon please!

ciao,
Fish

PS: what i\'d do to throw hermione from that tub and hop in myself - fully clothed of not... it would be fuuuuuun...
person Lily Malfoy
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving this. It\'s one of my favorites so far out of what has been submitted. The situation you have put them in is brilliant. I can hardly wait for more on any of your stories, as I am reading all of them. Looking forward to the updates.
person Bindi
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell, of course the ironing can wait!!! How about two chapters on this fic, one on the dating agency, and leave the other until after the ironing?(I don\'t think I\'ve read it so I won\'t mind a bit of a wait until you update).

Get Sev naked and in the tub quickly...
person Jeanette
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaa, where is the rest! That ending was so cruel. This is a SPECTACULAR response to the Bubble Bath Challenge.

Ehlaana/Jeanette
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tehehe....evil writer....teasing them so. loving it so far, would love to see it belonger then three chapters but hey you are the writer after all. Keep it up. Good Luck. Evil writer.
PAP
person aprilgrey
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very much enjoying this and looking forward to the next installment.

Thanks for writing it! April
person Raven
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it.

It\'s nice to see that Hermione is the one who has to \"chase\" and not be the chased.
and McGonnagal giving her the push, brilliant.

the cuteness of the shy Blushy Severus is a pretty good change, still keeping him a broody, but shy bloke is different and fresh.

cant wait for more Bubbly goodness
person Seraphina
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Make him say yes, please make him say yes!!! He just has to get in that bath with her. Really enjoyed this first chapter, it was witty, sweet, and really nicely written. Hope you update soon and of course the ironing can wait, it should be banned anyway!