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for Bubble bath

by Shiv5468

schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL I love your story!! More! Please...more!
person kristy
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
TOAST WITH APPLE BUTTER ON IT!!!! :) several slices in fact. pretty please!
person Redone
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*raises two hands for toasting Draco*
person lupinlover
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lol! I like this one so much better... maybe because there seems to be some of ... the canon in it, as opposed to all the ... angst ... melodramatic angst in Biter Bit...

I liked McGonagall: \"
person Susanq
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see Draco squirm. Let his mental state be his own punishment. LOL. Great story so far!

Susan :-)
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHO did Hermione really get her advice from? Is Severus being a sneaky bastard? It doesn\'t seem like he had enough time for polyjuice to wear off? Must know what will happen next, have a strong need to know!!! Deb >^..^<
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Did he do it? I wonder. I also wonder what little plot you\'re cooking up. hehe Looking for updates!
person Laerai
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wrfulrful twist! The sneaky bastard! I wonder how revenge will come about? It could be a very pleasant experience! ~.^
person Jenny
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, splendid! Beautifully done, darling! *And* tasteful!

Lovely last line. Absolutely brilliant. Do you intend to go further, or is this going to be it?

(As long as you keep writing *something* similarly light, witty and sweet, I don\'t mind. I\'m just curious. :) )
person Talene
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! I am so loving it! Please write more soon?