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for Charming a Phoenix

by GlindaTrisstt

person Village Mystic
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continuing to enjoy. Interesting problem you\'ve set up.
person Village Mystic
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do good relationship and romance, Glinda. Being over 18 myself, it is harder to get into interest for a 16 year old chraacter. However, how you are writing Paige and Harry seems to be workin ten terms of ringing true for character development and story.
person Village Mystic
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Phoebe has a flirt with the one you\'re with policy. Well only three alive sisters. Perhaps Remus knows it ust ust fun-flirting and not serious flirting? Or do you plan a secondary crossover to \"pair up\" Snape or Lupin?
Anyhow, I like how you chose jobs for everyone. I thought Phoebe might work in divinatins, but it isn\'t really something you can teach. And assistant libraian might have bored her. Thanks for writing and sharing.
person Village Mystic
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. Good Ship. Decent erotica.
person Village Mystic
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the storytelling. It is hard to write good group scenes. I\'m also beginning to wonder if Phoebe would be more than just a Flavor of the moment with Severus.
person D
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still a very entertaining story. Any updates coming up?
person Ding
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story this the only hp/charmed crossover that I have read that made any sense to me.
Please updat soon.
person Schmee
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked itt
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You did well with thers Srs
person rubberduck
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is great. sadly i\'ve missed the last season or so of charmed but it seems like you have quite the handle on the characters. the pacing of the story is great too. it\'s a slow build to what is to comd i\d i\'m guessing this will be quite a long journey. can\'t wait for more.
person Megan Andres
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I am happy to see that you\'re ba I k I khow how difficult it can be to get back to writing after hard times and just wanted to let you know that you do a wonderful job. Thank you.