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McGonagall busted Harry again. But this time Harry had a new partner. McGonagall would be on Harry

I bel believe bones is so honest! And manz twice by minnie? Harry;s gonna get SCREWED....honestly, will gryffindor go to negative pts? Hey wonderin is blaise in this? Hmm maybe some slytherin girls?

YAY!!! Finally!!! I was beginning to think you had deserted this story ( actually I was beginning to think you had died or had come down with a terminal illness, but fortunatelly that was not the case ). OMFG!!! Are there any virgins left in Hogwarts? I thought Hufflepuffs were the shy stupid ones...
And, I\'m beginning to think you have a McGonagall fetish. You sick, sick guy!!! It\'s the second time he\'s caught!!! Are you sure you won\'t reconsider and do Narcissa as well?

You ask me if I want to be just a name, and I must say no. Does that mean I\'ll have my own chapter? If that\'s the case, then this poor, humble one is deeply grateful!!!

Keep up the good work!!!

XOXOX

you know, these stories could have been much more, with a better, more cohesive plot and actual entertainment value, but the writing style and the smut leave a lot to be desired. i\'ve seen pornos with better dialogue and with more believable sex. this is just badly, badly written. are the people who find this hot in high school or something? i just can\'t find anything smutty about this at all. it just comes across as the cheap sexual fantasies of someone who has no clue how to write sex scenes.

and for the author-- beta readers are your friend. find one in the harry potter fandom who will be tough on you, but fair, and use their input. don\'t just ask a friend or your reviewers to do it for you, because they\'d be biased in your favor, and that will only hurt you in the long run if you actually want to improve as a writer. find an author that YOU like, or someone objective in the fandom, and oachoach them for help, and take their advice and suggestions seriously.

The way ou are heading is there going to be a Harry/Minerva in the future? I do enjoy your smutt, but How far along are you in the sequel for \"broken wands?\"

I have read some of the story, anst ost of the reviews. I am a psychologist who specialises in forensics, and so thought I could shed some light on a couple of issues. I have no intention of re-starting any argument, please don\'t take it that I am; I just think a little clarification might help for some people.

SlytherinDamsaidsaid:
>There is no proof homosexuality is gic. ic. For every study that says it is, there\'s
>another that says it\'s not. It\'s politically correct to label it genetic, but don\'t you dare
>try to put this out as some unquestionable fact.

I beg to differ that it

i dunno but susan and harry made a good couple

OH MY GOD!!!!
LOL
I CUDA DOA DO THAT LOL
Man i\'d say sumtin like doing a biology project hmm wait lol COMC??
LOL
More plz!

HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!THAT GIRL KNOW\'S HOW TO DO IT!!!!This one was awesome!!!!And,whoa,she is quite honest....anyway,this was cool,and WE WANT MORE!Next chapie Ginny will get what she was wanting since her first year...no prob...Ron will Kill Harry....you know,I love Harry&Hermione above anything else,so,this is the ONLY ONE fic that isn\'t H/Hr that I read,just because it is so damn funny!!!So,try to write next one as fast as you can,but dont diminish your quality over our necessities,so take your time!See ya soon!

PS-That would be kind of difficult,bro,unless if you live here in Brazil!

What can I say? Each chapter is better than the last. I don\'t think this was lesser in any way than the last chapter, in fact I enjoyed this one better than the others. Something about your description of Susan and her personality. Ginny\'s next huh? Ron\'s li\'l sis... that ought to be fun, and I can\'t wait to see old McGonagall\'s reaction this time (if you plan to show it). ^_~