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great work, exclent fanfic, always love to read you work, can

A question for everyone who keeps calling the sex in this story \'rape\' - How can you say it\'s rape when Harry *asked Hermione\'s permission* and she gave it, or when Cho was the one who started the whole thing? Do you think any slightly unsatisfactory sexual encounter is rape? Any situation where a male applies the least bit of persua is is rape?

Rape is *non-consensual*. Both girls gave their consent. Changing their minds afterwards doesn\'t make it rape.

It\'s fun to read a simple, light-hearted smut story for once - the deeply emotional ones are good, too, but sometimes a bit of silliness is called for. Keep it up - looking forward to the next chapter.

OK im confused you added m/f at the end. That measn its all male have sex with female rigth? i hope so since slash is gay figuratilvely and stupidly. The way it is after everyone makes it sound likes he will have sex with guys.. i hope he doesntt update soon

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I have an impression that Harry and Susan match quite well in sex. Harry should try to do it with her again, rather than go after Ginny. Unless Ginny pounces on him.

C\'MON! UPDATE! I WANNA SEE GINNY! MAKE RON WALK IN ON THEM!

this story is so interesting. and to think you only find knowledge in books.

Nice work. I think you can make it more like a story. McGonagall must think that Harry is some sort of pervert, ans abs abusive childhood hasn\'t gone without leaving a heavy mark on him. It seems like Harry and Susan can have some more sessions until we get to Ginny.

HE\'S ALIVE LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!!!

and harry got caught again by ol\' McG; and why\'s he gono Gio Ginny? fuckin bitch\'s probably full of diseases anyway.

PLZ write a chapter with Narcissa. I\'m a Narcissa fan and I love Milfs :)

And Narcissa\'s definitely a MILF.

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